[NEW FIRE!!!] Kailez - The Escape (Prod. JustZay)

[Laudacity93]

I'm currently working on my self produced EP: 5:23 AM. At the same I'll be posting instrumentals for leasing as well.

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[pgathriller]

Not really diggin it man; the mix on the beat is really muddy and just not really well done

-The clap is really thin and quiet and has too much reverb
-The beat has this like gigantic epic movie vibe but it sounds like it's overfiltered or something, it just sounds like it was ran through some sort of filter that cut off the highs and push up the lower mids and made it really muddy but then entirely cut off the real low end (you can barley tell that there's actually a kick in that beat)
-Vocals also sound really hot, definitely sound like they were peaking when they were recorded -- they clearly hit distortion, like a 2:28

I dunno dude, I really wasn't diggin it -- you've got the energy in your delivery but that's about all you've got here man.

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

i dunno why, but i just wasnt feelin this shit.
part of it might be because the only two words you said were niggas and bitches, like a million times each.

[Laudacity93]

Thanks I appreciate the feedback from both of you. There's always room for improvement.

[mykill]

I think I'm going to catch on fire and explode because for once I agree with chuckfo'

You didnt say anything but "niggas" and "bitches" on some dope production. With a beat like that, you should had some more introspective/epic lyrics, but this was just regular trap rap... Mastering was pretty on point though, cept for the intro. Needs some effect tweaking on the filter. Outro is bleh. Lyrics would have been if you used a more trap beat (like this http://www.soundclick.com/player/sin...=11780223&q=hi). I might make an example with it when i get home today lol

Overall: 2.8/5

[Laudacity93]

Appreciate the feedback.

[ATLien666]

I like the beat, I really like the beat. Reminds me of some 40s/50s noir detective type shit with an obvious hip-hop influence.

With that being said, yo're not a terrible rapper and i could you see being popular because you have an extremely mainstream sound. Like, there's nothing really different about you, your lyrics or the way you rap, yk? This wasn't a great beat choice and that really fucked it up. If this is the rap you do, find a beat that will let you shine through. This beat made us all focus on your lyrics and like everybody else said, there was a looooooooot of niggas and bitches with some random lines slung around.

Overall: 3/5 because it's not terrible, just average in every sense of the word.

[JSmooth]

beat was dope and i was feelin the energy but lyrics were way too simple. i feel like youve got some potential if u really sit down and think about what u write

flow: 3.5/5
lyrics:2.5/5
overall: 3/5

[Laudacity93]

I like the beat, I really like the beat. Reminds me of some 40s/50s noir detective type shit with an obvious hip-hop influence.

With that being said, yo're not a terrible rapper and i could you see being popular because you have an extremely mainstream sound. Like, there's nothing really different about you, your lyrics or the way you rap, yk? This wasn't a great beat choice and that really fucked it up. If this is the rap you do, find a beat that will let you shine through. This beat made us all focus on your lyrics and like everybody else said, there was a looooooooot of niggas and bitches with some random lines slung around.

Overall: 3/5 because it's not terrible, just average in every sense of the word.

beat was dope and i was feelin the energy but lyrics were way too simple. i feel like youve got some potential if u really sit down and think about what u write

flow: 3.5/5
lyrics:2.5/5
overall: 3/5

I understand where the both of you are coming from, thanks.

[THA GR8 M8]

You got a good voice for rap and a really good mic presence. Your lyrics are really lacking though. If you improved on lyrics and pulled the listener in more, you'd be set.

[Laudacity93]

You got a good voice for rap and a really good mic presence. Your lyrics are really lacking though. If you improved on lyrics and pulled the listener in more, you'd be set.

Thanks bruh I understand. I'll put more time in constructing my lyrics. But to be honest when i first heard this instrumental it didn't come off to me as a track that should be lyrical. It seemed more like a street single like rick ross - hold me back..I never really intended to make it lyrical that's why i didn't put as much time in the lyrics. People who've heard this track locally love it. I'm from the south not saying we don't make lyrical music but it is the country.. I rather make a track people can relate to on one take then make one where they would have to replay it over and over just to get my message. But I appreciate everything and everybody who has responded so far. And I take everything into consideration.

[THA GR8 M8]

Thanks bruh I understand. I'll put more time in constructing my lyrics. But to be honest when i first heard this instrumental it didn't come off to me as a track that should be lyrical. It seemed more like a street single like rick ross - hold me back..I never really intended to make it lyrical that's why i didn't put as much time in the lyrics. People who've heard this track locally love it. I'm from the south not saying we don't make lyrical music but it is the country.. I rather make a track people can relate to on one take then make one where they would have to replay it over and over just to get my message. But I appreciate everything and everybody who has responded so far. And I take everything into consideration.

I don't mean lyrical as in some Lupe shit, or whoever you might consider as lyrical. I actually don't even fuck with music like that at all lol. I would prefer this song over music like that any day. I just mean in that sense that no lines really stood out, not much wordplay/mutlies/etc, and it just seemed rushed.