Gibbsy - Face In The Crowd

[Gibbsy]

Yo yall heres a track i made a while ago, during the same time i was making terra nova but never realeased it , tbh i got so many tracks i ent released but think i might start droppin a few at least, anyways let me know what yall think


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[IN10SION]

I like it, beat is not so good in my opinion but you did well on the song

[mykill]

wasnt that bad. not your best though. almost everything was good, but I can see why you left it off Terra Nova. Not up to par with what you've been putting out.

Overall: 3/5, mediocre at best

[Gibbsy]

wasnt that bad. not your best though. almost everything was good, but I can see why you left it off Terra Nova. Not up to par with what you've been putting out.

Overall: 3/5, mediocre at best

yeah i feel dat man, i left it off for a reason lol i dint drop it cuz it ent my best work but i just wanted a few more tracks up to check out ya get me

[pgathriller]

diggin the vibe -- it's got a ton of energy but it's still somehow soothing; must be those rhodes in the beat or something cause this is smooth

only things I wasn't diggin is your vocals are really sharp, maybe try using a DeEsser or smooth out the highs on the "s" words

Other than that though man your delivery is dopeness on this, rocking that beat nice man

[MC_Crary]

Damn this beats hot man. Maybe you should revisit this one. Try a different, changing flow. Is that Mac Miller on the hook? Guess this wasn't an original. Sometimes I have a hard time keeping up with you lyrics cause of your accent, but they flow was on point. I just would've approached this one differently.

[Tha Professor]

Your flow is really sick, u fit the beat perfectly, only if u had recorded this on a good mic. BEAT IS SUPER DOPE, but get miller off this, u can kill this beat yourself. Nice rhyming techniques. Just... dope, nothing more to say

4.25/5

plz re do this

[Sentus]

Why would you not allow downloading on your tracks? lol that makes no sense

Anyways, are you british? lol I can't remember. But your flows all over the place, doesn't sound good with the beat at all. You sound like you're trying way too hard, it has to be natural. Your lyrics were extremely boring, I listened to the whole song and couldn't remember one line from it. Your music is always the same ol shit.

[Gibbsy]

Why would you not allow downloading on your tracks? lol that makes no sense

Anyways, are you british? lol I can't remember. But your flows all over the place, doesn't sound good with the beat at all. You sound like you're trying way too hard, it has to be natural. Your lyrics were extremely boring, I listened to the whole song and couldn't remember one line from it. Your music is always the same ol shit.

i apprciate the feed and the critque but one thing i stated is this track was a throwback track i dropped off my mixtape , ill agree lyrically it was pretty bland but explain how my flow was all over the place? and how my musics always the "same ol shit" because thats a negative comment with no substance, your opinion is fine but if your going to say that could you at least explain what u mean

[Sentus]

Alright, it sounds like it's all over the place because you're rapping syllable after syllable in a pretty fast flow but your voice has the same tone in every word, there's no melody to it. While that's happening this beat with an amazing melody and all kinds of sounds mixing together is playing in the background so it sounds like your vocals and the beat don't match. You have to have melody in your voice, that's something that big mainstream artists like Big Sean and Lil Wayne do very well, that most underground rappers don't do very well. An example is the lines you spit right after you said I don't like to baby sit. It just sounds like words words words words and not like you're rapping it to the instrumental if that makes sense.

[Gibbsy]

ahh yer that makes sense man!! thanks for explainin, yer like i said orginially man this was a throwback that i hadnt wanted to use that i jus put out for the sake of it, which i dont normally do, but yer im still learning and improving neways just trying to make each track better n better

[Sentus]

I feel ya man (Y) At least you have the balls to release your throwaway tracks, I don't release shit.