#HardKnockClique - Flexin' --

[DatWeezy]

As promised, an #HKC version of --- Flexin'


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@HardKnockClique








Feed 1 - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post926628

Feed 2 - http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post926623

[mykill]

Had The Stu' all hype and shit from our version of Flexin, then you disappeared...


where the fuck you been Lil Trev

[DatWeezy]

ha working behind the scenes. We droppin the tape September 3rd!

[KidComet]

You should play around with your flow more, like try change the way you say certain words and stuff.

Lyrics were good nothing amazing, You arent bad, your pretty close to sounding professional.

^ This is for the first guy btw.

[JSmooth]

this track was straight, quality was pretty good and lyrics were decent. i wish there was more enrgy in the first verse but the second dude did a good job of switching up the flow in the second verse which def helped the song….overall i give this a 3.7/5

[DatWeezy]

Thanks for the feed my dudes!

[DatWeezy]

Anymore feed !? I know we been gone for a while, but this song just the start to new music from us.

Ya'll the ones who asked for an HKC Version of this shit! haha

[__cas__]

Nice track. Flow is pretty good too. First dude had better flow then the second guy but both of you did your thing. Lyrics were a little weak but the flow made up for it. 3.5/5 good shit.

[DatWeezy]

thanks for the feed!

One thing.. All ya'll saying these lyrics weak... Do you hear the multies we brought on this track.. hella...

[YUNG DIEZEL]

shit was funny to me for some reason. dawg came in hard like "yeah muthafucka betchu know we str8 flexin,"
sonny said "you're a fuckin pussy, i dunno though im just guessing" lol.
i dunno what kinda lyrics niggas round here be looking for,
every song i see around here everyone always puts "lyrics were nothing amazing"
but lyrically and flowise this verse was good.
you have a funny accent or lisp or something.
when i listen to songs, i dont expect the same thing for everyone, i look for what entertaining in the track.
somebody said wish there was more energy in da first verse, but i felt a lot of energy though.
i heard you on the mykill version of this song though, and your adlibs were louder and make it sound better in that version.
you said "smoking on that power, its that sour, thats perfection" <<(that line was hot too, niggas here dont know what dope lyrics are)
in mykills version, after you said dat line, you made a coughing sound, which made it sound doper.
actually all your little adlibs between the pauses made it sound better, but in this version your adlibs sound at a lower volume, and it takes away from the track compared to the other version.
"tired of the hate im just trynna have a good year" ([adlib]: HOE!!!) << lol, that adlib made me laugh.
this version has better mixing and quality than the mykill version though, and the the kicks hit harder in this version.

i actually prefer mykills hook more than this version hook lol.
but you and ya second verse guy have good chemistry.

second guy has a weird voice too, which is nice.
he has a lisp in his voice too. i dunno if its yall accent, or maybe its the de-esser,
becuz de-essers make you sound like you have a lisp sometimes.

both of yall switched ya flows throughout ya verses.
im not gonna tell you to change ya style like some suggested,
but i would say that the adlibs turned up in the original mykill version of this verse make it sound doper.
you should sometimes take feedback from other artists with a grain though,
becuz every artist envisions shit how they would do it instead.
especially if ya fans lovin the way you been doin shit,
and dudes here tell you to change something thats been workin fine already....


my only question is this; in the mykill version, what effect did you add on coughing adlib???

[mykill]

That suppression line was reaching too far. Coulda came up with something smoother. I agree with Diezel and the adlib problem. I know that's A-Mitch ridin shotgun but is there a third guy on here? (the one with the suppression line) him and Mitch sound similar. Great team effort. Definitely work on that mixing a bit more.

Overall: 3.6/5

[Pengfknwin]

shit was funny to me for some reason. dawg came in hard like "yeah muthafucka betchu know we str8 flexin,"
sonny said "you're a fuckin pussy, i dunno though im just guessing" lol.
i dunno what kinda lyrics niggas round here be looking for,
every song i see around here everyone always puts "lyrics were nothing amazing"
but lyrically and flowise this verse was good.
you have a funny accent or lisp or something.
when i listen to songs, i dont expect the same thing for everyone, i look for what entertaining in the track.
somebody said wish there was more energy in da first verse, but i felt a lot of energy though.
i heard you on the mykill version of this song though, and your adlibs were louder and make it sound better in that version.
you said "smoking on that power, its that sour, thats perfection" <<(that line was hot too, niggas here dont know what dope lyrics are)
in mykills version, after you said dat line, you made a coughing sound, which made it sound doper.
actually all your little adlibs between the pauses made it sound better, but in this version your adlibs sound at a lower volume, and it takes away from the track compared to the other version.
"tired of the hate im just trynna have a good year" ([adlib]: HOE!!!) << lol, that adlib made me laugh.
this version has better mixing and quality than the mykill version though, and the the kicks hit harder in this version.

i actually prefer mykills hook more than this version hook lol.
but you and ya second verse guy have good chemistry.

second guy has a weird voice too, which is nice.
he has a lisp in his voice too. i dunno if its yall accent, or maybe its the de-esser,
becuz de-essers make you sound like you have a lisp sometimes.

both of yall switched ya flows throughout ya verses.
im not gonna tell you to change ya style like some suggested,
but i would say that the adlibs turned up in the original mykill version of this verse make it sound doper.
you should sometimes take feedback from other artists with a grain though,
becuz every artist envisions shit how they would do it instead.
especially if ya fans lovin the way you been doin shit,
and dudes here tell you to change something thats been workin fine already....


my only question is this; in the mykill version, what effect did you add on coughing adlib???

Appreciate the feedback a lot, not most people actually listen and critique shit. They just say fix your flow and your lyrics and then give it a decent rating like 3.5 and move on. Can easily tell that you actually listened to the shit. Much love.

That suppression line was reaching too far. Coulda came up with something smoother. I agree with Diezel and the adlib problem. I know that's A-Mitch ridin shotgun but is there a third guy on here? (the one with the suppression line) him and Mitch sound similar. Great team effort. Definitely work on that mixing a bit more.

Overall: 3.6/5

Naw bro that's still me at the end lol, it's only me and trev on this one as of right now

Thanks for the listen again tho, we can always count on you.

I wish you could hear this cypher that Trev has he's got a dope ass line for you in it, but idk if he's putting it out ;(