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abides by the rules? i like this guy. LISTEN TO THIS. FEED BACK THIS.
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Hook: Eh. Not bad. Not good either.
You need to step up your delivery. Sound too monotone. Give your verses some more energy. You mix this yourself? Mixing was pretty fly. That effect on "you're gonna have to prove it" or "fucking g.i.joe" wasnt very effective. You might want to turn it up. Lyrics were standard trap/crunk rap affair, but you sound good. You project well. You just need to give the track more energy when you do it.
Best line: "So fresh, make you look outdated"
Overall: 3/5, this is the baseline. Give us another one and we'll see how well you do.
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Originally posted by mykill View Postabides by the rules? i like this guy. LISTEN TO THIS. FEED BACK THIS.
---------- Post added at 07:39 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:26 PM ----------
Hook: Eh. Not bad. Not good either.
You need to step up your delivery. Sound too monotone. Give your verses some more energy. You mix this yourself? Mixing was pretty fly. That effect on "you're gonna have to prove it" or "fucking g.i.joe" wasnt very effective. You might want to turn it up. Lyrics were standard trap/crunk rap affair, but you sound good. You project well. You just need to give the track more energy when you do it.
Best line: "So fresh, make you look outdated"
Overall: 3/5, this is the baseline. Give us another one and we'll see how well you do.
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Honestly im diggin this shit... The beat DOPE!
The hook is alright in my opinion, kind of catchy! haha
Mono-Tone is the biggest turn off in this song.. Not that its always bad to be mono tone, because sometimes the beat requires that... But like Mykill said.. More energy would have made this song HYPE as fuck..
Your flow was good, nothing to special. Kind of stayed the same but it was decent!
Lyrics -- Not really feeling them honestly.. Basic... Eat your girl like a snack ? Forced I feel like... But whatever works i guess lol.
3/5 .. Give us more, ill be back to feed more..
This sounds good tho. I can tell this was in an "Actual Studio" for sure..
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Originally posted by DatWeezy View PostHonestly im diggin this shit... The beat DOPE!
The hook is alright in my opinion, kind of catchy! haha
Mono-Tone is the biggest turn off in this song.. Not that its always bad to be mono tone, because sometimes the beat requires that... But like Mykill said.. More energy would have made this song HYPE as fuck..
Your flow was good, nothing to special. Kind of stayed the same but it was decent!
Lyrics -- Not really feeling them honestly.. Basic... Eat your girl like a snack ? Forced I feel like... But whatever works i guess lol.
3/5 .. Give us more, ill be back to feed more..
This sounds good tho. I can tell this was in an "Actual Studio" for sure..
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