Rembrandt - Ramona

[ATLien666]

This right here the shit, but she ain't really into that.

MONSTER coming soon. YouthInRevolt

I just wrote this around an hour ago, but I've had the chorus written for a week or two. Here's my ode to all the tumblr hipster/punk rock bitches that don't fuck with a nigga, lmao.

Lyrics:
*Scott Pilgrim vs The World sample*

(Verse 1)
Yeah, with some hair like Ramona/
Pardon, I'm a goner 'cause I'm 'bout to fall in love/
Don't even know yo' fuckin' name, but I'm tryna see what's up/
and I know I'm not your type/
but I'll learn guitar, if you like/
Postin' our pictures all on tumblr/
With your skin tight jeans, wearin' boots all in the summer, right/
With your hair changin' colors like a strobe light/
and it took my heart, too/
Cupid ain't shoot an arrow, he shot a harpoon/
fuck.

(chorus)
Told me, "Drop the bass," but I ain't really into that/
I ain't really into that/
She told me, "Drop the bass," but I ain't really into that/
I ain't really into that/
I'm more Kendrick Lamar, but she never pays attention/
When I play her all my songs, man, she never wants to listen/
Told her, "This right here the shit," but she ain't really into that/
She ain't really into that/
"This right here the shit," but she ain't really into that/

(Verse 2)
Tell me what you love, girl, tell me what you like/
Tell me your favorite instrument and I'll practice it all night/
Look, all I do is rap, but I'll pull a string or two/
Push a couple buttons, shit, girl, I'm probably sing to you/
What a nigga 'posed to do when you show him no attention?/
I should probably give up, but I don't know what I'll be missin'/
I don't know if you will listen/
or if this'll make things different/
but this song is dope as fuck, so we might switch positions

(Chorus)
Told me, "Drop the bass," but I ain't really into that/
I ain't really into that/
She told me, "Drop the bass," but I ain't really into that/
I ain't really into that/
I'm more Kendrick Lamar, but she never pays attention/
When I play her all my songs, man, she never wants to listen/
Told her, "This right here the shit," but she ain't really into that/
She ain't really into that/
"This right here the shit," but she ain't really into that/

*Scott Pilgrim vs The World sample*

FIN


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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

little big sean.

[ATLien666]

little big sean.

Bruh. Sigh.

[THA GR8 M8]

Sounds a lot like that Kevin track.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

yeah you developing your style nicely, and you sound comfortable on the mic.
i guess you have a simila presence,cadence, and enunciation as big sean, but a younger sounding voice.
but dats not a bad thing i guess becuz alot of people like big sean nowadays.
i love the beats that producer make.
i remember when it was him and djtank but i dunno if they split or what.
nigga got bangers for days.
fuck, im mad he sampled dat skillex joint though,
cuz when dat skillex song first came out i wanted to be da first to sample it ,
but now mad niggas jumped on the idea already.

Sounds a lot like that Kevin track.

^^^ prolly da beat and the flow he used.

[ATLien666]

Sounds a lot like that Kevin track.

Same producer, so that's probably why.

yeah you developing your style nicely, and you sound comfortable on the mic.
i guess you have a simila presence,cadence, and enunciation as big sean, but a younger sounding voice.
but dats not a bad thing i guess becuz alot of people like big sean nowadays.
i love the beats that producer make.
i remember when it was him and djtank but i dunno if they split or what.
nigga got bangers for days.
fuck, im mad he sampled dat skillex joint though,
cuz when dat skillex song first came out i wanted to be da first to sample it ,
but now mad niggas jumped on the idea already.


^^^ prolly da beat and the flow he used.

Right on, bro and this big sean thing is becoming a problem, lol. but yeah, this nigga makes some dope ass beat. I think I dl'd 3/4 of 'em, but idk if he's working with the other guy or not. seems like he's solo now from the looks of his twitter. and I don't even fuck with skrillex, but I understand why a lot of people sampled this. shit's dope.

[IN10SION]

i like it man, like you say this song is dope as fuck! just aint feeling this filtered hook, but the verses are dope af and the beat pretty dope too! man i think i gonna download it and pump it in my car haha

[mykill]

This song is pretty fresh. Mixing is pretty darn good to be honest. Remy's really coming out into his own on this MONSTER tape... I'm ready for the whole thing to drop.

Overall: 4.3/5

[danielnfl36]

Sounds a lot like that Kevin track.

that kevin track is my shit! loved this though id buy a album from this guy if he had songs where he used that same flow/beats like the nicki one he used on that but shit id buy a album from him if he was sellin shit one of my fav artists in the studio

[YUNG DIEZEL]

that kevin track is my shit! loved this though id buy a album from this guy if he had songs where he used that same flow/beats like the nicki one he used on that but shit id buy a album from him if he was sellin shit one of my fav artists in the studio

what nicki one you talkin bout???

[danielnfl36]

what nicki one you talkin bout???

the nicki minaj beat "im ready to shoot" ( last chance)

[MC_Crary]

Really feeling this track man. Great concept. I didn't hear any slips in the flow either. One of the better thought out tracks you've dropped imo. I can;t really give any feedback cause this is a solid track. Should do a remix with me though lol.