J-Smooth- The Flow

[JSmooth]

#grindin….feedback please



The Flow- The Flow 1.mp3


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post944455
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post944858

[mykill]

mmmm subliminals. love it.

[JSmooth]

mmmm subliminals. love it.

mmmm the hating. i love it...

[mykill]

Feedback: Well it seems like you believe, that you have something to prove to people. From first listen the "they tell me flow, so imma flow" line seems wonky. It's as if you trying to make a statement about something, but it doesnt work and falls short. Maybe "they tell me go, so Imma flow" or something like that would sound better instead but its all up to the ear of the listener. For instance, take it when Lil' Wayne says "Dark ass shades, I can't see them haters" sounds a lot better than "my shades are dark, i cant see any of the haters". Both have the same meaning and intention, but one definitely sounds better over the beat than the other. There was a noticeable Lil' Wayne-esque laugh in this track as swell, and for someone that is doing his best P.R. campaign on his Mixtape thread to deter the similarities between his music comparably having the same style as Drake's, you would think you would want to steer away from other similarities to other artists. Beat choice was questionable as well if your intention was to "go in" on someone and/or your haters. Pretty Drake style beat if you ask me. Flow and delivery were good. Vocals need to be turned up a notch.

TLDR Version: Eh. Not felling it. Overall: 2.5/5

[MC_Crary]

Beat sounds like an Underground Kings (Drake song if you didnt know) rip off and so does the flow. Not feeling this one bro. Real nigga feedback.

[Tha Professor]

Sounds like drake flow, but def not same voice. Real niccuh feedback. Where's the experiments?

[TheBestRapperAlive]

The beat on this song is dope, from the beggining i thought you were gunna kill it, your flow is on point but at times i dont really understand what your saying. Think it could of been better. Overall 3/5

[JSmooth]

preciate all the feed…i should be droppin more music soon so be on the lookout

[akkucc]

Beat is really awesome , i love the beat. your flow is great, i like it. but i think all of your songs sounds same. but i like em. 1st verse was great, second verse was also good, but it comes second. Good luck!!

[JSmooth]

Beat is really awesome , i love the beat. your flow is great, i like it. but i think all of your songs sounds same. but i like em. 1st verse was great, second verse was also good, but it comes second. Good luck!!

preciate that bro. u check out my mixtape?

[indiglo09]

Dope track manee

I like the beat more than a lotta the ones on your mixtape as I feel it's more original.

U def flowed on it and went in. Content wise is still questionable but if it's u then stick with it.

Not much else to say on it. I'm def feelin it.

Overall - 4/5

[DatWeezy]

Beat is a lil alright, sound like something drake would do for sure. You know i fucks wit you, and this song is ight but i think you can def do way better my man. I like you singing more than rapping thats for sure. Your flow is there on this one, but the voice is a lil diff and its hard to understand some things you say but either way its dope. I fucks with this for the first listen. No download tho... 3/5