Young Fire & Lil' Jay - SwagStar

[YoungFire420]

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1st Verse - Young Fire. I freestyled it all. So yes, i did mess up a couple times..
2nd Verse - Lil' Jay. His first track. He did really good for being his first track!

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[IAmJay]

Re: Young Fire & Lil' Jay - SwagStar

Haha, still got PLENTY more songs to come!

[YungNRuthless]

Re: Young Fire & Lil' Jay - SwagStar

YF's 6/10
Verse was alright, was expecting a little more tho
Lil' jay 5.5/10
for hes first song, i see where you're heading towards a wayne flow, i think u should try not saying "Yaaa Digg" and make up your own sig, and other then that you did alright

[YoungFire420]

Re: Young Fire & Lil' Jay - SwagStar

Hahaha. Yeah. I freestyled though mayne.

[IAmJay]

Re: Young Fire & Lil' Jay - SwagStar

YF's 6/10
Verse was alright, was expecting a little more tho
Lil' jay 5.5/10
for hes first song, i see where you're heading towards a wayne flow, i think u should try not saying "Yaaa Digg" and make up your own sig, and other then that you did alright

Yeah I feel you haha, but thanks for the honest opionion. I could of had a better flow.