Burn (Freestyle) - Stephen K.I.N.G.

[StephenKING]

Check this out, tell me what you think, sorry if the quality isnt amazing or anything like that. Feedback please

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Feedback:http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...-my-lines.htmlhttp://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...tml#post947765

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Burn.mp3

[mykill]

You mic sounds good. What effects are you using for mixing? You using an EQ and Compressing the vocals? Make sure you're writing to the beat and not just rapping what you've written cause it sounds robotic or the flow sounds off when you do that. Also, when you write, make sure the words and syllables for each bar fit into the tempo of the beat. Too many words makes it sound awkward. I'm speaking from my own experience.

As far as lyrics and stuff goes, there were some nice ones in there. Delivery sounds a bit shy, but you project your voice well. Something was up with the mixing and that's why I asked about it. Made you sound kinda in a whole or something. If you're using FL Studio, I'm typically good with setting vocals to a channel, doing EQ on "Vocal Enhancer" and the Multiband Compressor on "6 DB". Try that. Might make it more crisp. But that's all with FL Studio.

Overall: 3/5

[StephenKING]

You mic sounds good. What effects are you using for mixing? You using an EQ and Compressing the vocals? Make sure you're writing to the beat and not just rapping what you've written cause it sounds robotic or the flow sounds off when you do that. Also, when you write, make sure the words and syllables for each bar fit into the tempo of the beat. Too many words makes it sound awkward. I'm speaking from my own experience.

As far as lyrics and stuff goes, there were some nice ones in there. Delivery sounds a bit shy, but you project your voice well. Something was up with the mixing and that's why I asked about it. Made you sound kinda in a whole or something. If you're using FL Studio, I'm typically good with setting vocals to a channel, doing EQ on "Vocal Enhancer" and the Multiband Compressor on "6 DB". Try that. Might make it more crisp. But that's all with FL Studio.

Overall: 3/5

TY I've been waiting on feedback and thanks for the info, ill play around and see if i can figure out what you mean, cause i have no idea how to mix and stuff. I had no idea what i was doing so after i exported i put it in audacity cause it wouldve been easier to mix.

also youre thing says Georgia, im from there also what part are you from?

[Cli-City]

WOW! This surprised me...you got a very monotone voice..you should try to add some more activity to your vocals...either get more animated or aggressive...something that can help the listener. But this was nice...lyrics needs work but I like the flow changes throughout...this beat requires a little more energy though......good work homie..

[StephenKING]

WOW! This surprised me...you got a very monotone voice..you should try to add some more activity to your vocals...either get more animated or aggressive...something that can help the listener. But this was nice...lyrics needs work but I like the flow changes throughout...this beat requires a little more energy though......good work homie..

Thanks man, I will try to add more to my voice that's what I practice on I'm my spare time is sounding like I'm angry or trying to convey emotions with my voice, ha, but thanks for the Feedback, I will work on the voice thing, I cant change the lyrics cause the real name of that song is "Something Stupid pt.1" off my mixtape I wanna do, if you hear what I say on No Lie you'll understand the title. Is there anything you want me to check out?

[Cli-City]

Thanks man, I will try to add more to my voice that's what I practice on I'm my spare time is sounding like I'm angry or trying to convey emotions with my voice, ha, but thanks for the Feedback, I will work on the voice thing, I cant change the lyrics cause the real name of that song is "Something Stupid pt.1" off my mixtape I wanna do, if you hear what I say on No Lie you'll understand the title. Is there anything you want me to check out?

Whenever you get time just check out the two new tracks I posted...

[MC_Crary]

Damn man once you get that delivery down you're gonna be a problem. Lyricism is there and the flow. Just work on the emotion you give on the track. Ill be checking for you.

[My Hubbie]

think your flow is to slow or don't fit to burn
but otherwise it's kinda good

[waynefan24]

It was cool. Nice delivery and lyrics. Just need to turn up your mic next time. 4/5

[ATLien666]

You sound like a non-white young corruption, lmao. but you randomly found delivery and it was kinda cool, but this beat really fucked everything up. You don't have the emotion/delivery for this type of beat. It requires spazzing and getting' your meek mill on, you know? Lyrics weren't terrible, but weren't great either. From listening to Cli's song, maybe you're just meant to do songs like these? You sound more comfortable with relatable, personal subjects.

3/5

[StephenKING]

You sound like a non-white young corruption, lmao. but you randomly found delivery and it was kinda cool, but this beat really fucked everything up. You don't have the emotion/delivery for this type of beat. It requires spazzing and getting' your meek mill on, you know? Lyrics weren't terrible, but weren't great either. From listening to Cli's song, maybe you're just meant to do songs like these? You sound more comfortable with relatable, personal subjects.

3/5

Thanks I appreciate the feedback