Sky High

[yungfamou5]

Haven't dropped nothin since july so here's a song produced by: vybe
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[mykill]

Why is this being #SleptOn?

Vybe is my favorite producer. Skate Bravo used to be... but he lost his sound. That hook is terrible. Not lyrically, just those effects are so mechanical and robotic it takes away from the beat and the energy. Its abrasive. You listen to it and you're like "Whoa! Wtf just happened?" You got a female running with you right? She needs to belt that out, Alicia Keys style, unless she's a rapper. or you could just use a different effect. Either works lol.

Yung on the track is great. Always expect the leader to perform and set the pace for his fam, and you dont disappoint. You gotta clean that noise up somehow on your vocals though. Takes away from the quality of your tracks and without it, your tracks sound more pro and radio ready. If nothing else, the main focus should be getting EVERY OUNCE of your studio/recording work to sound 100% pro.

Overall: 3.9/5, this thing has GREAT potential. Make some improvements and adjustments and this would be a great #1 track on a tape and its very catchy and remember able. Nice work!

[Young Corruption]

Like mykill said, this is being slept on. Flow was not bad i remember from a long time ago and you've improved a lot which is obviously good. Mastering needs work, Idk if it was the effect you were using or what but its sounds a little grainy. There are ways to improve on that but it takes practice messing with the setting. Like the lyrics as well but you can go harder. I'd give it a 3.5/5

[yungfamou5]

Apreciate the feedback, ima see wat I can do wit the hook cuz of course dats wat grabs peoples attention

---------- Post added at 09:27 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:10 PM ----------

@mykill no lie that's a great idea to get a female to sing that, I never thought about it lol but I'm on the search now to get someone to hop on the hook This will b the first single off my sky high ent. Compilation