Time Will Tell - Mac ft SK

[DeezyMac]

posting this shit from my phone since the internet in the dorm is some ass and been down for a couple days now. so excuse my lack of proper markup and allat shit. anyway, this is the FIRST song I've recorded since decmeber 2011 so im lowkey hype about it lol. im the second verse. my nigga SK on the hook and first verse.

http://www.sharebeast.com/vpyh5nytg55s

shoutout my nigga MC for the link.

lyrics doe:
They talk behind ya back, so you know they scared to face you.
So when you find out niggas bitchin', look at them, smile, and just say thank you.
They ain't make you, so they can't break you, only pride and lack of effort can.
If the world were full of gamblers, you still couldn't find a better man.
Than Mac, and it's true, I'm back in the mood.
Bitches beware, niggas be scared.
Like a pin where I spit, I'm attackin' the booth.
And I swear I'ma spazz and get ratchet as Juice.
And I can't forget my J.
Roll it up and puff away, like Diddy left, my city stressed.
'Cuz niggas ain't, doin' they thang.
Claimin' they ride, but won't stay in they lane.
Not chasin' the fame, but chasin' a new hoe.
The sky is the limit, no Jason Derulo.
No Biggie, no Carter, I'll really go harder.
Cash over ass, so bitty don't bother.
Killin' these tracks, they instrument martyrs.
Like Eminem group, they really get slaughtered.
I'm doper than a ki o' bricks.
Fresh J's, always rockin' shorts so you can see the kicks.
On the totem pole, I'm important, y'all are so and so.
I'm nowhere even close to the lowest, but y'all are Peter Grif.
He the shit, yeah I am, toilet's gettin' mad as fuck.
Cuz I shit on every track, and I don't even have to flush.
If she got that good-good, but bad, then I have to fuck.
Spittin' on that pussy like I'm Daffy Duck,

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...im-a-king.html

[MC_Crary]

I might check the first guys verse later but right now I'm to excited to hear a new verse from you lol.




Damn dude this track literally had me sitting with my mouth wide open. You're biggest attraction is that wild flow. Sickest flow here for sure man. Very unpredictable but always great You work the beat out effortlessly, but then you bring the lyrics to dude. The " a tack in tge booth" line "puff away", like diddy gone" the lowest/lois line. I've always liked your music but this has to be my favorite verse from you. We gotta get more tracks from you my dude. Alot of niggas might miss this cause of the time it takes to get to the track, so I uploaded it on share beast for you. Hope you don't mind.

Time Will Tell2.mp3

[DeezyMac]

good looking out on the link bruh. and thanks for that feedback u blowing my head up like shit no frank. got me feeling like I just dropped the best verse ever lol.

[MC_Crary]

good looking out on the link bruh. and thanks for that feedback u blowing my head up like shit no frank. got me feeling like I just dropped the best verse ever lol.

One of my favorites ever spit around here. Extremely witty. Dope shit dude.

[StephenKING]

Them lyrics for your verse were real cool, real smoov, but that beat, idk it just doesnt seem to flow right, no disrespect to whoever made it, and reading your lyrics made it better cause I caught all the stuff but when listening I couldnt really, which isnt necessarily a bad thing because in the end itll garner more replay value cause people will be like. "WTF that nigga just say? rewind that back.... did he.... oooh shit he did!"

[DeezyMac]

lol u really don't like the beat? its actually what motivated me really. when all im surrounded with is trap sounding shit, this was a breath of fresh air. but to each his own doe. and yeah that's what I go for whenever I write. lines that you get on the second or third listen before you're like "oshit" lol.

[mykill]

Beat is different.... Not the usual thing you hear people around here bumpin, so its nice to get something different going through the rotation Mixing is different too... SK sounds kinda off, maybe not enough bass in the mixdown. Flow and delivery for him sounds great though. Deezy, you seem to as consistent with the flow and lyrics as before. "Like eminem's group, they really get slaughtered" or "cause I shit on every track, and I dont even have to flush" were some of the best punches from your verse. I think with some proper mixing to the track, this could be a very standout track. Still good in its own right.

Overall: 4.7/5

[DeezyMac]

yea im still learning how to properly mix and master. my usual settings didn't work on SK voice so I had to change all my presets to accommodate him.