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  • Cold - Stephen K.I.N.G.

    (Verse 1)
    We open the door; the young prince is at his desk
    You can tell he’s excited, his heart beats out his chest
    Pen flying across the paper, his handwriting’s a mess
    And he tries to write neater, hey, he’s doing his best
    But he can’t slow down, he’s not finished yet
    He’s just tryna show the world a man they’ve met
    Tryna put into words, the things they’d never get
    And he gon’ do away with all these feelings of regret
    Got a lot of things to say, so many things to write
    And he aint even tired, he’s been up all night
    Just tryna get it done, and it’s gotta be perfect
    He passes up on fun, he knows it’ll be worth it
    The looks on their faces when they see what he did
    He looks in deep places for feelings that he’s hid
    Got emotions bottled up’ he’s breaking off the lid
    Think the world gives a shit? He’s a naïve kid
    (Chorus)
    Cause when your heart freezes over
    Cold spreads to you shoulder
    Don’t worry about it little man
    you’ll get your crown when you’re older
    All the royalty is coming, all you gotta do is focus
    Only worry about yourself them other niggas is locusts
    (Verse 2)
    He puts the pencil away and he looks down with pride
    First thing he’s everfinished, best thing he’s ever tried
    This one thing makes up for all the times he’s ever cried
    In his room, matter of fact all bullshit aside
    He just poured out his heart there’s nothing left to hide
    And it’s not like he’s hurt, all his tears have dried
    He looks down at his desk, at all his work
    You can see in the words all the pain in the hurt
    But it doesn’t matter now, it’s gone, it’s good
    He lived a good life, never deep in the ‘hood
    He wasn’t a bad kid, always did what he should
    And he helped out his mom, whenever he could
    He picked up his pencil and started to draw a picture
    There were two people, playing games by a river
    He drew them in a place, where nothing bad was done
    Then he labeled to two people, father and son


    (Chorus)


    (Verse 3)
    Ma! I’m done! What do I do next?!
    “Well you’re gonna have to mail it, so get his address”
    How do I do that? Call him on the phone?
    Cause I haven’t talked to him since he’s been going
    I’ll call him later, when I have time alone
    I wonder if he knows how much I’ve grown
    He hasn’t seen me, and it’s been a while
    Then he went in his room, shut the door and dialed


    (Phone Call)
    Dialing – Ringing
    “Hello?”


    “Hey, who is this?”


    “It’s Stephen, is Kenneth there?”


    “Why? Do you need him?”


    “I was hoping to mail him something for father’s day, I need his address though”


    “Oh, he’s in jail now, maybe next year, if he remembers; he’s never mentioned you before”


    “Oh”


    “I’m sorry”


    “Nah it’s whatever”
    (Dial Tone)
    (Chorus)

  • #2
    yo this is badd man,
    your rhyme scheme is cool. the chorus seems that it could be catchy man
    gotta feeling that this would sound good if recorded man

    4/5

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    • #3
      epic storytelling/wordplay. nice theme. is this about you. this is nice.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by ParisHaynes View Post
        epic storytelling/wordplay. nice theme. is this about you. this is nice.
        yeah man this is about me, its something I wrote in school, I have an albums worth of material written out that im saving for my first album

        ---------- Post added at 01:13 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:12 PM ----------

        Originally posted by beaniebeanz View Post
        yo this is badd man,
        your rhyme scheme is cool. the chorus seems that it could be catchy man
        gotta feeling that this would sound good if recorded man

        4/5
        Ill ht you when/if i record it

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        • #5
          Originally posted by StephenKING View Post
          yeah man this is about me, its something I wrote in school, I have an albums worth of material written out that im saving for my first album ---------- Post added at 01:13 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:12 PM ---------- Ill ht you when/if i record it
          i knew people did that. im gonna separate the storytelling type rap from my just going in rap and save it for my album too. thanks for the pointer.

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