Julez- Monster

[TheBestRapperAlive]

Didn't really like this one just a throw away from the mixtape

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[JSmooth]

wasnt a bad track especially for a throw away. a little monotune for me which made it seem like it was lacking energy. i think if u were a little more hype it could have been pretty dope 3.2/5

[mykill]

Always love this beat...

What's that noise when you spit? There's like a beating or something. It's like the track has some added reverb or something. Or there's some wind or something. Make sure the track isnt getting added effects cause its screwing it up.

Hook wasnt half bad. Pretty catchy. Mixed well too.

Verses were nice. Good multis. That monotone flow you got isnt half bad and really works for ya. There's even good hints of energy here and there.

I can here your phone at 2.24... I think that was intentional but you need to make it louder if that's the case.

Overall: 4.1/5, This is a quality Julez track. #StopSleepin

[TheBestRapperAlive]

Always love this beat...

What's that noise when you spit? There's like a beating or something. It's like the track has some added reverb or something. Or there's some wind or something. Make sure the track isnt getting added effects cause its screwing it up.

Hook wasnt half bad. Pretty catchy. Mixed well too.

Verses were nice. Good multis. That monotone flow you got isnt half bad and really works for ya. There's even good hints of energy here and there.

I can here your phone at 2.24... I think that was intentional but you need to make it louder if that's the case.

Overall: 4.1/5, This is a quality Julez track. #StopSleepin

I dont know i heard that noise too and have no idea what it is haha, didnt realize it until got home from the studio that night. And the phone ring was for "that fame should be calling" hahaha. But thanks for the feedback homie

[Sentus]

Slow flow combined with a laid back, lethargic delivery = super boring song. You need to mix it up somehow to add some energy to your song and at least make it listenable. Not to mention your lyrics are some of the most cliche, boring, overused lyrics ever. Try and be creative. Also, make sure you turn your phone off when you record lolz

[MC_Crary]

Definitely need to put some more energy into this man. Just an energetic delivery can make a song ten times better. You gotta sound like you really feel what you're saying. I don't know if you think you're a monster or you're afraid of the monsters lol. Even if you're stoned while recording your laid back flow should have more "swag" (for lack of a better word) to it. Put some soul into it lol. I see potential here though. Keep working homie.

[BigDickBandit]

wasnt a bad track especially for a throw away. a little monotune for me which made it seem like it was lacking energy. i think if u were a little more hype it could have been pretty dope 3.2/5

I agree. Pretty dope though!!

[ATLien666]

Yeah, nice flow, but your delivery is really bad. Even with adlibs, which is really weird. Like Mac said, you have to feel and believe everything you're spitting, even if it's all a lie. Hm, idk what else to say, honestly. Not terrible lyrically, but just a lot of average lines.

2.5/5

[TheBestRapperAlive]

Its not one of my better songs guys i said that. But its a throwaway just somthing i posted on twitter and thought to post here too, its pretty old too