Mac - MacPolo Freestyle (Untitled)

[DeezyMac]

I went on a recording spree today and made at least 5 songs and I just decided to pick the best one out of the bunch to post. Another Mac classic. Hopefully d4 doesn't come out anytime real soon and distracts people from checking this out. Lol. But yea, again, I'm not a good engineer, I'm just a rapper lol so pardon the peaking and clipping at some points. My nigga MacPolo hit me on facebook like "can you kill this" and this was my response to that. Enjoy.
(lowkey I'm tryn takeover the studio lol)

Lyrics:
Baltimore Swag, from the cap to the shoes.
For the cash, these niggas be actin' a fool.
But the Mac, stay chill, yeah I'm actually Kool.
Like the red dude, when he come crash in the room
I'm ahead of you, y'all in the back of the room.
Blast, without packin' a two.
Bitches, I be asking for two, smash when I get menage'd.
Finish off, that's a happy ending with my dick massaged.
Insect flow, buggin' haters, yeah I tick 'em off.
When theys spittin' bars, crickets wouldn't give applause
Cookin' up the raw shit, ya man ain't boiiii
I can top whatever he brew no synagouge.
Talkin' bout that money then I get involved.
That's Ben and his friends, and they twins, I'ma get 'em all.
Gettin' all, vain, yeah I'm under they skin.
So I can make they blood stop like Menopause.
Get 'em boss!
These niggas only sorta dope.
I'm a star with no astrology, but I bet that every whore'll scope.
I came into this game, today it told me, see my water broke.
'Cuz niggas know I did it like the day that Eli Porter choked.
When I speak, I, deep fry every beat I, speak on.
Any minute, any day of the week, I, keep my streak high.
When I beat guys. Can't see I, he blind or got weak eyes.
Y'all niggas peaked, I'm, still climbin' 'til I reach high.
In the deep skies 'til I see clouds.
Keep loud in the piece, breathe in, breathe out.
Peace out, you ain't gotta ask, 'cuz I be bout.
That life they ain't, I pipe they wife.
Got a couple straight bitches in the crib, but I bet they dyke tonight.
You think you better? Nigga SIKE yo life.
They said I meant something in the flow, 'cuz I rock these mics all night.

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[Gibbsy]

dddddddddddope!!, haha im feelin this yo' flow is fire, lyrically its fiyahh aha, freestyle is dopeeee lol but really off the dome??
the beat is nicee man great beat choice, the delivery is tight nothing really to critize except maybe the mastering but then its a freestyle gotta give it a 5/5 im feelin it!!

[DatWeezy]

FUCKING DOPE AS FUCK!!!!

I fucks with this man... The horoscope line --- niceeeeeeeeeeeee----

I feel like you started to fall off but you were so good at the beginning that it didn't matter.

Not to much to complain about here.. This all fire man. Keep up. 4.5/5

[DeezyMac]

naw this ain't off the dome. i can't freestyle for shit. lol i only put freestyle because i couldn't think of a title.

[Sentus]

Delivery was good, you sound confident while rapping. Flow was extremely shaky in the beginning. You were cramming way too many syllables into your lines and that caused you to have to rush the end of lines. You also started to run out of breath a bit and that hurt your delivery. You stepped it up though at the end. Everything from
When I speak, I, deep fry every beat I, speak on.
to
Peace out, you ain't gotta ask, 'cuz I be bout.
was awesome. Lyrics weren't anything special, just the same old same old. That horoscope line was a huge reach and incredibly corny.

[DeezyMac]

Sentus always keeping it a hunnid.
you right thoo. i recently starting using this fast flow and I really don't have the breath capacity for it so a lot of my words don't come out fully....yet. you really didn't like my horoscope line tho? lol.

[BigDickBandit]

Flows pretty dope. Lyrics are okay.

[Sentus]

Well I'm pretty picky about my punchlines. For one, Horoscope does not sound exactly like whore'll scope and two, it's just like an Eminem punchline where he just randomly says words that also sound like other words that are related. It's not a true double entendre because if you read it "but I bet that every horoscope" it would make no sense at all.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Well I'm pretty picky about my punchlines. For one, Horoscope does not sound exactly like whore'll scope and two, it's just like an Eminem punchline where he just randomly says words that also sound like other words that are related. It's not a true double entendre because if you read it "but I bet that every horoscope" it would make no sense at all.

its called a play on words. smh.
that line was actually good, i dont know what sentus on.
it gives you a lot more variety than if you were to limit yourself to only "true double entendre's"
as you like to call them.

[MC_Crary]

Every verse you've dropped lately is sickening. I'm ready to hear another full track from you. I think I was wrong in the DD3 Wayne comparison. More of a comparison to Tha Joker. You ever heard of him? Dope rapper out of Atlanta. Always expected him to blow.

[THA GR8 M8]

More of a comparison to Tha Joker. You ever heard of him? Dope rapper out of Atlanta. Always expected him to blow.

He's from Mississippi bro... lol

[ATLien666]

Once again, pure dopeness. I havent heard a full song from you, but I want to soon. Did you do this all in one take? Like sentus said, you runnin out of breath fucked your delivery up at times. But yeah, you remind me of Los, honestly. Same city, idk if you heard of him, but you definitely remind me of him. Also, I thought the horoscope line was pretty clever.

4.5/5