Touch Of Beatz Production/Famousisme (Once upon a time beat)

[BigDickBandit]

Yo i need some opnions on this beat:

http://soundcloud.com/famousisme/once-upon-a-time

http://soundcloud.com/famousisme

Check my other stuff out too if you want Ive put hours and hours on a couple that ive done most recently.

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...z-monster.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-untitled.html

[pgathriller]

not diggin it man

there's a few notes in your melody that are out of key or maybe it's because the bass isn't tuned with the melody; whatever it is, something is definitely off

Those claps are really tiny and weak too man -- layer them up a few times over to give them some more presence and power

The beat also just sounds incomplete structurally -- like it's missing a lot of elements and variation sections; you do switch it up with the synth from bells and bring in and out the hats, but it doesn't seem to be enough...maybe it's just me though

anyway man, keep at it, but imo this one didn't hit

[beaniebeanz]

man i agree with "pgathriller", the notes are definetly out of key or atleast they sound out of key.

the beat is just too simple, wouldnt really want to listen to it twice, it just sounds like a really bad job of sample claps, hi hats and kicks put together but hey u gotta work, work and work to get better. try switching up the melody a but and using compressors or limiter for your claps/snares to make em louder and snapy.

2/5