Poyo - Hollywood Dreams (Shoutout Hugh Hefner & Miley Cyrus)

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Mixed by purpen & rapped by me

DL LINK Poyo - Hollywood Dreams.mp3


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[RoadToC4Fan]

This actually isn't that bad. I wanna hear some bangers from you though.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

This actually isn't that bad. I wanna hear some bangers from you though.

Cumming soon my nigga beleeee dat

[mykill]

Some more energy in the chorus and this concept would go over the top. There's some very stellar Poyo verses on here. Good story telling and track build up. You definitely nailed this concept on the head. Great work dude. Maybe put a backing vocal to the chorus of an R&B dude harmonizing and it'd be perfect.

Overall: 4.1/5

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Some more energy in the chorus and this concept would go over the top. There's some very stellar Poyo verses on here. Good story telling and track build up. You definitely nailed this concept on the head. Great work dude. Maybe put a backing vocal to the chorus of an R&B dude harmonizing and it'd be perfect.

Overall: 4.1/5

i was thinking the same thing when i recorded it honestly. me and purpen gonna try to worksomething out, glad you likedd the song tho. ive been really trying to improve my story telling lately and for you to bring it up is swagger to ahunnathousandtrillion

[TygaPride]

no pussy lip

overall 0/5

[MC_Crary]

Nice track dude. I think think think that hook was nice for the beat lol. Could us a slight tweak at the beginning. Sounded a bit off. Start work on a mixtape nigga.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Nice track dude. I think think think that hook was nice for the beat lol. Could us a slight tweak at the beginning. Sounded a bit off. Start work on a mixtape nigga.

You talking bout the start of the chorus or the Steve jobs sample at the beginning?

[ATLien666]

This shit is dope as fuck, I'mma be back for a full review later, but yeah, you definitely need release a mixtape.

[MC_Crary]

You talking bout the start of the chorus or the Steve jobs sample at the beginning?

The chorus.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Did y'all fuck the words from Steve jobs ? I listened to speeches from bill gates/Obama/bill Clinton and Lil b before I chose it

[ATLien666]

Okay, full review time. Love the beat, chorus, and concept. You're a way better storyteller than you give yourself credit for. This has a real laidback feel. Your flow's never a problem, but fuck, this song is dope. The second verse is great, though. Nice imagery and everything. "money solves everything; call my wallet 'Einstein"' one of the dopest punchlines I've heard from you. The only thing I didn't like about this song was the autotuned yeah and the chorus is feeling kinda empty. I suck at shit like that, so I have no tips, lol.

4.5/5