Soundtrack 2 My Life - Stephen K.I.N.G. (Cosign Myself) Rough Copy (IM SICK)

[StephenKING]

Alright, soooo I got a cold and I was gonna wait to do music but I havent uploaded anything here in a while so here's the sick (haha get it) preview of a Cosign Myself song

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BTW : There are a features open, just message me and I'll send you the list of songs.


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[Laudacity93]

It sounds good but dont get me wrong the flow on the verses need work. If you haven't wrote a hook yet I'll record one for you lemme know.

[StephenKING]

It sounds good but dont get me wrong the flow on the verses need work. If you haven't wrote a hook yet I'll record one for you lemme know.

:O I've never heard that flow thing before honestly, but thanks, Ill work on it when I re-record it when im not sick. And ummmm I have a friend who sings who's coming over to jump on a few songs idk if he wants this one, I'll send you the beat later in PM, probably tomorrow, but I'm working on a mixtape if you want the list of songs ill be doing with open features lemme know

[THA GR8 M8]

As a rough draft, I won't critique this too hard. But you definitely need to have more energy on the track. You sound very bored on this. I think the reverb you used is kinda too heavy as well, so thats kinda draining away from the vocals. But the lyrics weren't bad. The flow would definitely be better with more energy. I'll got a cool hook for this if you need it. I might not be the right person for it since it needs to be kinda sung, but yeah lol. Looking forward to the final product g.

[StephenKING]

As a rough draft, I won't critique this too hard. But you definitely need to have more energy on the track. You sound very bored on this. I think the reverb you used is kinda too heavy as well, so thats kinda draining away from the vocals. But the lyrics weren't bad. The flow would definitely be better with more energy. I'll got a cool hook for this if you need it. I might not be the right person for it since it needs to be kinda sung, but yeah lol. Looking forward to the final product g.

I honestly was bored, I was kinda let down, I hate being sick I tried not to let that in but I guess it did, but I can feel the cold going away so I should be able to do it again soon and if you want me to PM you the beat just lemme know and that way you can put the hook in and I can hear it, same as other guy, but if you wanna be on the tape just PM me and I'll send you the list of beats ill be doing thatll have collabs

[MC_Crary]

When you redo this one you got it right man, this is my favorite Cudi track. I don't think being sick got in the way of this. You just gotta learn how to switch up the energy for each track. The way you went on Cli's track was perfect, the energy worked. But you gotta switch it up one different style tracks. This is an introspective track but you gotta go with the beat more. Some introspective tracks do come with alot of energy. Your lyrics aren't bad and you have a good, I just need you to work on that delivery. Good luck man.

[StephenKING]

When you redo this one you got it right man, this is my favorite Cudi track. I don't think being sick got in the way of this. You just gotta learn how to switch up the energy for each track. The way you went on Cli's track was perfect, the energy worked. But you gotta switch it up one different style tracks. This is an introspective track but you gotta go with the beat more. Some introspective tracks do come with alot of energy. Your lyrics aren't bad and you have a good, I just need you to work on that delivery. Good luck man.

Honestly after I typed that last reply IDK if I believe my own excuse anymore, I'm gonna try to upload another song without a hook a little later today.

Oh and its my fave Cudi track so.