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    Y'all niggas said you wanted to hear an actual song from me instead of just going in on a beat. Well I'm garbage at those. But if its what's in demand, I'll supply. I suck at choruses so excuse the lack of head-bobability in it. But the verses though are classic Mac material that I'm sure will be praised. *shrug* I'll give myself a 7.5/10. Gave shoutouts to my niggas @mykill, @Cli-City and @MC_Crary at the end thoo.
    Last edited by DeezyMac; 09-10-2012, 10:01 PM.

    What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

  • #2
    That william/bill line is crazy as hell...mad I didn't think of that...the hooks is a little congested but it's dope though...the first 2 lines of the second verse is funny as hell...Yea so this is just as strong as your other stuff to me...your deliver/flow puts you over the top..I think you should capitalize off of your animated delivery....it's dope..and makes listening interesting...
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    • #3
      flow is crazy aha, the beat is dope , you kinda remind me of cudi, i dno why tbh, but you have that b.o.b delivery this is dope shit the lyrics are dope...

      the hook cud of been mixed a lil better maybe not panned left to right on the "let um know" libs
      jus my opinon nice work tho man, 4.5/5 just cuz i like the similarities to b.o.b on this track


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      • #4
        I'm on my second listen cause I know sometimes you use wordplay that you have to listen more than once, I'm pretty sure I caught most of it, the chorus isn't as bad as you may think it is. You said it would be an actual song, so I expected like, more of a song, to me it seems like you were just "going in on a beat" with a chorus thrown in. Which isn't bad really. Oh, and that "dodge her calls" part was kinda funny to me I wasnt expecting it and then I kinda liked it.

        Overall : ummmm for this type of song for me it would change every listen, I'm now on my 4th so its lik 8.5/10

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        • #5
          Hahah got that B.O.B flow sorta, that was a dope william bill line tho, your flow has me hooked haha idk its really unique and captivating.
          I giving this track about a 3.5/5. good energy and flow is cool






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          • #6
            Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
            That william/bill line is crazy as hell...mad I didn't think of that...the hooks is a little congested but it's dope though...the first 2 lines of the second verse is funny as hell...Yea so this is just as strong as your other stuff to me...your deliver/flow puts you over the top..I think you should capitalize off of your animated delivery....it's dope..and makes listening interesting...
            trust me i will. when i first started rapping i had the most monotonous boring voice and flow and even I hated listening to my songs. Now I just get loose and add some character to my mic presence.

            Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
            flow is crazy aha, the beat is dope , you kinda remind me of cudi, i dno why tbh, but you have that b.o.b delivery this is dope shit the lyrics are dope...

            the hook cud of been mixed a lil better maybe not panned left to right on the "let um know" libs
            jus my opinon nice work tho man, 4.5/5 just cuz i like the similarities to b.o.b on this track
            ew compared me to cudi AND b.o.b in one comment. lol. but thanks though for the feed. i like messing around with panning because i hate having everything centered. i like the stereo effect but next song i make i'll try to do it a little better.

            Originally posted by StephenKING View Post
            I'm on my second listen cause I know sometimes you use wordplay that you have to listen more than once, I'm pretty sure I caught most of it, the chorus isn't as bad as you may think it is. You said it would be an actual song, so I expected like, more of a song, to me it seems like you were just "going in on a beat" with a chorus thrown in. Which isn't bad really. Oh, and that "dodge her calls" part was kinda funny to me I wasnt expecting it and then I kinda liked it.

            Overall : ummmm for this type of song for me it would change every listen, I'm now on my 4th so its lik 8.5/10
            yeah i'm not good at organizing a "real" song. lol. i just typestyle a couple 16's then throw a chorus in the middle. I'm a horrible topical rapper so I stray away from 'em. but thanks for the listen and the high rating. i'm still working on your joint so i'll have that to you soon.

            Originally posted by KidComet View Post
            Hahah got that B.O.B flow sorta, that was a dope william bill line tho, your flow has me hooked haha idk its really unique and captivating. I giving this track about a 3.5/5. good energy and flow is cool


            b.o.b again? lol. y'all making me wanna change my style now. i hate bob. but thanks thoo.

            What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

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            • #7
              Good geez! Deezy's goin off on that swag-ass beat... The chorus is good, just need to get the volume levels right and the panning right and the effects right. What you got there is good, just needs a little bit of tweaking. Really goes well with the track. Lyricism and wordplay on this is bananas. I dont think that there has been a track that you've been featured on or put out in the last month that hasnt been ill. Keep delivering the heat. If you keep going, you'll have enough tracks to throw on a tape lol

              Overall: 4.1/5

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              • #8
                I kinda liked the panning of the let em know cause since they kinda overlapped it sounded good. The flow and lyrics are crazy, you really feel comfortable of the mic which is always a good thing. the hook wasn't all that bad
                4/5
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                • #9
                  b.o.b.
                  EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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                  • #10
                    but forreally thoo this track >>>>>>>> b.o.b's discography.

                    What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by DeezyMac View Post
                      but forreally thoo this track >>>>>>>> b.o.b's discography.
                      ^^^^are you serious???
                      have you heard his earlier mixtapes before he got signed???
                      shit i even fuck wit his album.
                      also alot his songs actually have subjects and more meaningful topics instead of freestyles.
                      Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 09-11-2012, 09:43 PM.
                      EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by DeezyMac View Post
                        but forreally thoo this track >>>>>>>> b.o.b's discography.


                        Woah there don't go there

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