Gibbsy and Young Corruption: Empty Promise

[Young Corruption]

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When I first hear this beat i knew i had to get Gibbsy on it and i wasn't wrong. He murdered the beat

Lyrics:
I feel like i was only there to be used...
I know the truth so you know that we're through...
Everything I once knew turned into a lie...
Every time i see you i hoped that you died...


I remember the day that we met back in high school
i fancied other girls but i knew i wanted you
You were the only one in class that didn't give a fuck
to steal you from your boyfrind would take a little luck


I knew it would be worth all the threats i would go through
But the outcome of it all was something i wasn't use to
Emtpy promises were made, the lying never stopped
i was the one that had to paid, you made my heart rot


but That didn't affect you, you keep up with your game
i was just a pond piece that was treated like a slave
you ripped out my heart and threw it to the sharks
cheating in the background like you never had a heart


but that was the best thing, that you could of ever done
blackhole in the heart, i hope you die cunt
sleep with my bestfriend i don't really care
you'll be coming back with me when i become a millionaire

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[MC_Crary]

I think you have good story telling ability YC. Your lyrics have continued to grow but your flow remains stagnant. You sound the same on everything and aren't delivering with any energy. I want you to make me wanna hear you story. Your lyrics are worth listening to but the flow takes away from that. This track did have Gibbsy all over it. Gibbs came in and brought the energy needed for this track. The double time flow was perfect because it portrayed his aggression. I love to see the some flow improvement from you YC cause I hear that your have a story to tell. You just gotta keep my ear bro. Good effort guys.

[Young Corruption]

Thanks for the feedback. I actually posted the wrong version. I was messing with some things and got confused. I will post the right one tomorrow during the day. I feel like i put more feeling but you can't hear it in this version. New song i'm working on is no storytelling... Trying to change it up, I'm looking for a feature hopefully for it

[Tha Professor]

Beat aint bad, YC, tbh i didnt think u executed properly, but maybe that is cuz i am comparing it to gibbsy's verse.

3.5/5

[mykill]

Daaaaaaamn.... Gibbsy ripped this. That's that "mixtape" Gibbsy I've been talking about. Young, you put together some quality tracks. You got some good lyrics. NOW, just break that robot flow and you'll be good to go. This is definitely a must hear track for people around these parts.

Overall: 3.7/5