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  • J-Smooth- Yuck Freestyle

    This is gonna be my outro song for my show this friday…lmk what yall think all feed welcome



    Yuck- http://www.sharebeast.com/sn2y8jixmkga


    Feed:
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post971282
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post971280
    ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

    ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
    TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
    Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
    Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

  • #2

    This would deff be the best way to end a show. Perfect flow on probably one of my fav beats. I like how you keep comin' with the punchlines and witty references. the quality of the track is pretty good too.
    imo, dope freestyle.

    4.5/5
    THP // Summertime
    Coming Soon


    Twitter - @BVSEBYRD

    Soundcloud - ThaRealJ$

    Hit me up for collabs!

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    • #3
      never heard your music before. with a name like JSmooth thoo I figured you'd be a r&b, deep, story telling, love song type rapper. caught me way the fuk off guard when i hit play.

      but o fuk son this goes IN. you the only person here in the studio who got the same rhyme style as me. punchlines, swag rap, provocative, and in depth, over ya head, wordplay. we need to drop a collab tape. lol.

      plus this beat >>>>>

      What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by jmoney850 View Post

        This would deff be the best way to end a show. Perfect flow on probably one of my fav beats. I like how you keep comin' with the punchlines and witty references. the quality of the track is pretty good too.
        imo, dope freestyle.

        4.5/5
        preciate the feed and yea i wanted to make sure my last song wa gonna be full of energy and bars so im glad u liked it
        Originally posted by DeezyMac View Post
        never heard your music before. with a name like JSmooth thoo I figured you'd be a r&b, deep, story telling, love song type rapper. caught me way the fuk off guard when i hit play.

        but o fuk son this goes IN. you the only person here in the studio who got the same rhyme style as me. punchlines, swag rap, provocative, and in depth, over ya head, wordplay. we need to drop a collab tape. lol.

        plus this beat >>>>>
        actually a lot of my songs r deep, love, real, smooth type of songs but when i go over industry beats i usually try to murder it lol
        u should check out some more of my shit
        Last edited by JSmooth; 09-12-2012, 05:35 PM.
        ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

        ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
        TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
        Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
        Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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        • #5
          damn, that's dope -- for some reason I'm picturing it working way more epic as an intro song but I guess I can hear the outro potential too

          flow is mean man, super tight and you got a great presence on the mic dude; dope ass job
          http://www.ATBeats.com

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          • #6
            Man this Yuck verse is sick the delivery and flow were crazy I think starting or ending a show like this would have fans asking for more

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            • #7
              man this shit is bangin, punchlines were dope and ur flow was on point

              4.5/5
              Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
              But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
              So Just Call Me....
              "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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              • #8
                If there's one thing you're good at, its mercin' a beat with punchlines. Flow and delivery were constantly well. Hope your show went flawless. You should burned some copies of TF2 and handed them to people.

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                • #9
                  I like the track waaaaaaaaaay better than the original 4.7/5 overall
                  https://linktr.ee/sideshowkvlz

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by Young Mula Fan View Post
                    man this shit is bangin, punchlines were dope and ur flow was on point

                    4.5/5
                    preciate that bro keep bumpin this shit
                    Originally posted by mykill View Post
                    If there's one thing you're good at, its mercin' a beat with punchlines. Flow and delivery were constantly well. Hope your show went flawless. You should burned some copies of TF2 and handed them to people.
                    thanks bro and the show was crazy

                    Originally posted by Laudacity93 View Post
                    I like the track waaaaaaaaaay better than the original 4.7/5 overall
                    hell yea! go ahead and throw it into ur rotation lol
                    ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3

                    ONLY FOR THE PROMO 3- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=420199
                    TRUE FEELINGS 2- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=384127
                    Twitter- https://twitter.com/Waay2Smooth
                    Construction of a Dream- http://www.datpiff.com/mixtapes-detail.php?id=316150

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                    • #11
                      firstly that beat is just amazing, proper epic and sets a good feelin, the flow all over this is tight!!, the lyrics are just spot on, the punchlines are tight everything on this track is tight, yoru inflections and delivery are on point tooo i dont really have any critisism for the track at all..this is the sorta rap i like to vibe out to, nice work man!!! perfect outro to a show too!!

                      5/5


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                      • #12
                        dope as fuck bruh murder 2 perfection flow...delivery...punchlines #nasty 5/5

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