Who Gon' Stop Me Freestyle -Stephen K.I.N.G. Cosign Myself

[StephenKING]

Im uploading from my phone, I'll put the link can someone make that sound loud thing come up in the forum?

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[DeezyMac]

Must be, just me, I'm a do it, 'Cuz I'm Full Of Shit, Niggas, Can't Nobody Touch Me.
FixinYaRetinasNiggasInDebtAndPlacinYaBetsAndKnowingMyNextsIsSingingInTetanusEvenWhenImRusty.

^ went hella hard. if the quality of the vocals were a bit crisper, and louder, and the flow were more on point & on beat, I would have downloaded just that part of the song and played it over and over. lol. im sure i didn't get the lyrics 100% right thoo.

i like this joint thoo. the voice works on this beat besides the parts where you tried to cram a million syllables into one line, the flow was decent.

[StephenKING]

Must be, just me, I'm a do it, 'Cuz I'm Full Of Shit, Niggas, Can't Nobody Touch Me.
FixinYaRetinasNiggasInDebtAndPlacinYaBetsAndKnowingMyNextsIsSingingInTetanusEvenWhenImRusty.

^ went hella hard. if the quality of the vocals were a bit crisper, and louder, and the flow were more on point & on beat, I would have downloaded just that part of the song and played it over and over. lol. im sure i didn't get the lyrics 100% right thoo.

i like this joint thoo. the voice works on this beat besides the parts where you tried to cram a million syllables into one line, the flow was decent.

I swear I dont know what you guys are talking about when you say too many syllables in one; example please?

thanks for the quick feed, it wont let me thank you on my phone though, im probably gonna re record this also
It was first hand at mixing slightly

[mykill]

Must be, just me, I'm a do it, 'Cuz I'm Full Of Shit, Niggas, Can't Nobody Touch Me.
FixinYaRetinasNiggasInDebtAndPlacinYaBetsAndKnowingMyNextsIsSingingInTetanusEvenWhenImRusty.

That's an accurate description

The parts I could here I was like "WHOA!" but the muddled parts I was like "HUH?WHAT!?"

Next step for you methinks: Work on the clarity of your vocals.

[pgathriller]

damn, upgrade your recording software cause your flow is dope as shit


{haha just heard the line everyone is talking about with the syllables and it is a bit jam packed}


didn't really like it before the drums came in but once the drums dropped in that shit got hard -- if you can get a crispy recording on those vocals you'll be able to slam these tracks away man

[StephenKING]

damn, upgrade your recording software cause your flow is dope as shit


{haha just heard the line everyone is talking about with the syllables and it is a bit jam packed}


didn't really like it before the drums came in but once the drums dropped in that shit got hard -- if you can get a crispy recording on those vocals you'll be able to slam these tracks away man

I use fl studio to record, then do a little mixing with audacity, and tips on how to make it clearer or "crispy"?

And the like with the sylllable is "jam packed" which line is that? And is that a good jam packed or a bad jam packed

[Cli-City]

Bro you have potential...alot...I don't if it's your vocal infliction or tone but something is off....you gotta add some lightness or excitement to your vocals...like get a little animated or some thing so you can keep the listener interested...

it seems like during parts of the verse you say fuck the cadence let me just spit and try to get back on beat.....be careful about that..flow is important but staying on beat is important too...

[StephenKING]

it seems like during parts of the verse you say fuck the cadence let me just spit and try to get back on beat.....be careful about that..flow is important but staying on beat is important too...

an example please? I wanna know what to work on

[KingEz514]

Lyrically nice, but yeah the flow and voice is a lil' off. Would like to hear more from you tho'.

[StephenKING]

sorry.. butt... bump

[ParisHaynes]

Lyrically nice, but yeah the flow and voice is a lil' off. Would like to hear more from you tho'.

this, the lyric and most of the delivery is great. have to be louder tho.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

i think your voice ill as fuck, reminds me of somebody but i cant think of who atm. your flow bonkers and lyricks dope too, shoulda been longer tho lol