Sentus- Point of no Escape

[Sentus]

This is one of my favorite songs that I've made. Tried some new things and I think it worked out well.

Also download the mix tape stickied at the top of the studio if you liked this song

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[YUNG DIEZEL]

perfect beat for your style.
the hook was hilarious, kinda comical, the first time hearing. is that you singing??
i like the added layer on the hook after the second verse.
verses had nice imagery and lyricism.
very dark theme, which fits your style.
solid sentus song, i'd say.

[cGrumm]

I agree it was a good beat for your use. I wasn't feeling this, but I don't really listen to songs like this. Its good, just not me. The hook, should of been revised or executed better. Sounds good, just the hook was bad imo. 3/5

[mykill]

I dont like the hook on this... It's not that its a bad hook, just dont like the mixing on it.

[Sentus]

Thanks for listening, I've now decided this is my best song. I thought the hook was great, I just didn't mix it as well as it needed because I have no idea how to mix singing yet.

[ATLien666]

""it's insane, I'm so focused on the lane and finding where it is, I don't notice I'm in pain."

I really like this. I don't fuck with the hook, if you would've redone it, this would've been great. idk why, but this is a really listenable song. there's no battle rap delivery and you paint some good images. I'mma have to download the mixtape real quick. But yeah, this is pretty much perfect besides the chorus, especially after the second verse, it's soooooo long. But it's a real improvement over other songs you've made; just perfect making hooks and your songs will be top-notch.

[mykill]

cat's 'round here can't really appreciate stuff like this...

[Cli-City]

Haha..beginning sounding like some bad acting....Production on this one is on point, I love these type of beats....lyrically your normal sentus...great storytelling mixed with internal and external rhyme schemes...Very good track...that hook could've been special if you were going for an eeire vybe but the mixing and the execution wasn't good. Overall good track...

3/5

[BlakeJay]

Youre like the Lupe of HQ tbh..great lyricist and story teller

[Sentus]

cat's 'round here can't really appreciate stuff like this...

Haha I've realized that by now, it's all good though

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Youre like the Lupe of HQ tbh..great lyricist and story teller

The Lupe of anything is a huge compliment, thanks man

[mykill]

Youre like the Lupe of HQ tbh..great lyricist and story teller

you need to stop playin' and drop some new stuff. get back in the booth and give us something to put on our ipods and such

[DatWeezy]

Lupe a good fit....

The beat dope, the lyrics dope, the flow dope and the mixing sounds dope too...

I don't usually fuck wit yo shit, but this good. Keep it up..

4/5

hook: ehhh