nice verse

[ParisHaynes]

Okay, time to reinvigorate the rap game,
Got that young money, these hoes call me mac man(Mack Maine),
I'm eatin in these streets, no you niggas can't have a plate,
Pockets just growin, guess you can say they dilate,
If you ain't speakin money, me don't know dialect,
Once a blimish on the radar, but now i'm quite the spec,
Keep fuckin around, this banana clip a peel a hoe,
Stop askin what's my deal bitch, terms undisclosed

that's all i got for this verse so far.
how is it?

[StephenKING]

It's a good verse, but it sounds like you're trying to be lil wayne, which, is not good for trying to have your ownn sound, it may ake a difference if it was recorded though

overall 3/5 for style but the lyrics were 4.5/5

[ParisHaynes]

It's a good verse, but it sounds like you're trying to be lil wayne, which, is not good for trying to have your ownn sound, it may ake a difference if it was recorded though overall 3/5 for style but the lyrics were 4.5/5

lol, people always say i rap like wayne. idk why, guess it's cuz im heavily influenced by his music could be the reason my flow is similar.