2 Snippets Off My Demo **Feedback Please**

[Laudacity93]

My manager is sending out my demo to some A&Rs Friday so hopefully I can land a contract soon. the first track is a radio single. the second one is more what I like to do also one of my most successful sampled beats.

Written, recorded, produced by me.

UPDATE: Added new snippet with different vocal mixing technique
http://limelinx.com/el5rx

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post974243
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post974254

[Tha Professor]

The radio track has the elements of selling song, u were smart to spit those lyrics. but whats wit the mixing/mastering? if u produced all this shit im sure u must know how to do that? or is it just ur mic? i dunno if the 2nd one will be the closing decision tho of u getting signed tho. its pretty dope, but if i heard it i wouldnt be like "i need to sign yo ass right now!", ya digg?

[Laudacity93]

The radio track has the elements of selling song, u were smart to spit those lyrics. but whats wit the mixing/mastering? if u produced all this shit im sure u must know how to do that? or is it just ur mic? i dunno if the 2nd one will be the closing decision tho of u getting signed tho. its pretty dope, but if i heard it i wouldnt be like "i need to sign yo ass right now!", ya digg?

I'm not the best at mixing and mastering I'm still learning different techniques. But I appreciate the feedback. I'm recording another radio single tomorrow. I'll probably upload a snippet of that as well.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

I'll probably upload a snippet of that as well.

yo no more snippets though bro,
full songs only....

[Laudacity93]

yo no more snippets though bro,
full songs only....

What's wrong with snippets?

[YUNG DIEZEL]

What's wrong with snippets?

nevermind, if you feel the need to, continue with your snippets.

[Laudacity93]

nevermind, if you feel the need to, continue with your snippets.

The only reason I do the snippet thing I'm kinda a perfectionist a hate releasing something then going back and re releasing it. I don't feel like music can ever be fully complete I rather give people the full tracks on the album. When i'm at peace with the final offering.

[Gibbsy]

dont really got time right now to go into to much detail on the feed but dopeeeeeee shit homie both tracks are tight, mastering is a bitch for anyone so the mastering is actually pretty decent on both tracks, ill feed properly when i got the time , good luck with pushin ya demo tho man!!

[Checkmatemuzick]

The 1st track needs better mastering if its gonna be ur single but the concepts and lryics are dope and real I see wat audience your tryin to touch wit it and it could work...just get it mastered over the 2nd song is dope as fuck bruh good luck wit yo demo

[Laudacity93]

The 1st track needs better mastering if its gonna be ur single but the concepts and lryics are dope and real I see wat audience your tryin to touch wit it and it could work...just get it mastered over the 2nd song is dope as fuck bruh good luck wit yo demo

dont really got time right now to go into to much detail on the feed but dopeeeeeee shit homie both tracks are tight, mastering is a bitch for anyone so the mastering is actually pretty decent on both tracks, ill feed properly when i got the time , good luck with pushin ya demo tho man!!

Thanks I appreciate the feedback I actually just found yesterday a really good tutorial on youtube using adobe audition 3 heres something i recorded using the technique http://limelinx.com/fym2h check it out and tell me if you hear a difference if you get a chance.

[__cas__]

First track is hot, fix the mixing on it though. Kinda sounds like you have something over the mic. Flow is sick on the second track. Good shit bro.

[Laudacity93]

First track is hot, fix the mixing on it though. Kinda sounds like you have something over the mic. Flow is sick on the second track. Good shit bro.

Thanks bro. Hopefully I can get in a official studio to re-record everything.