2 Snippets Off My Demo **Feedback Please**

[IN10SION]

both are really not bad, especially the second one.. but the mixing isnt good at all.. your voice doesnt sound clear cuz of the mixing. get someone to mix your tracks or get better at it, but the songs all in all are pretty good!

[Laudacity93]

both are really not bad, especially the second one.. but the mixing isnt good at all.. your voice doesnt sound clear cuz of the mixing. get someone to mix your tracks or get better at it, but the songs all in all are pretty good!

good look on the feedback. im working with waves and looking up tips on youtube.

[RIOT]

You have a badass style and some tight lyrics man. Good job.

[Laudacity93]

You have a badass style and some tight lyrics man. Good job.

thanks bro.

[KingEz514]

I'm not really feeling the first one too much but I understand that it's more radio friendly so you're probably not aiming at a listener like me but the second is pretty dope. Mixing/mastering needs a lil' work but good work.

[Laudacity93]

I'm not really feeling the first one too much but I understand that it's more radio friendly so you're probably not aiming at a listener like me but the second is pretty dope. Mixing/mastering needs a lil' work but good work.

I appreciate it homie.

[KingEz514]

I appreciate it homie.

No prob, peep my track I just posted and leave feedback too.

[mykill]

Listened to these a while back but forgot to say something. My b.

Find a Way - Beat is interesting. Sometimes odd about it. Song sounds pretty good. Singing is eh. Is he not using autotune? That's cool and all. I like when people actually try to sing lol. Sometimes your flow has some bumps in the road.

5:23AM - Beat is different. Sounds like an old school hip hop beat, which is great. Needs deeper kicks, more bass. Or at least to hit harder. Got my head noddin'. You have good energy in your lyrics.

[Laudacity93]

No prob, peep my track I just posted and leave feedback too.

I got you.

Listened to these a while back but forgot to say something. My b.

Find a Way - Beat is interesting. Sometimes odd about it. Song sounds pretty good. Singing is eh. Is he not using autotune? That's cool and all. I like when people actually try to sing lol. Sometimes your flow has some bumps in the road.

5:23AM - Beat is different. Sounds like an old school hip hop beat, which is great. Needs deeper kicks, more bass. Or at least to hit harder. Got my head noddin'. You have good energy in your lyrics.

Appreciate it bruh, yeah thats my lil brother he's getting better with his singing we did this one without auto-tune. Imma definitely add harder kicks to the second one. More than likely I'm going to end up recording both of these again.

---------- Post added at 01:27 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:24 PM ----------

I updated the thread with a new snippet trying a different vocal technique.