Shootout Freestyle ft Mac (Deezy) - Stephen K.I.N.G. - CoSign Myself

[StephenKING]

A quick track off of CoSign Myself ft. DeezyMac sorry for that first verse, but that yawn is there for a reason, I myself have listened quite a few times and sometimes still catch something new in Deezy's verse,



Also, I wanna see can tell me the correct number of entendres in my second verse

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[DeezyMac]

the first four lines of your second verse >>> my verse.

"up in this bitch like I ain't never slept. say wassup to my dick. how you doing? pretty swell. get it? swell? swollen? keep it, rollin'" this some LOS-type shit right here. i love it.

my nigggggaaaaaaa. but forreally thoo i fuck with this track man. "my mind is a minefield bitch" is the only time your flow was off beat-ish but everything else was good. and yea every line of my verse is like a double/triple entendre. matter fact one of them's an accident LMFAO i was just listening "make 'em all shoo like a man inside a sweatshop" then the next word is "fly" and that song "shoo fly don't bother me" holy shit i literally just caught that. i'm a beast.

Collab of the Century.

[StephenKING]

the first four lines of your second verse >>> my verse.

"up in this bitch like I ain't never slept. say wassup to my dick. how you doing? pretty swell. get it? swell? swollen? keep it, rollin'" this some LOS-type shit right here. i love it.

my nigggggaaaaaaa. but forreally thoo i fuck with this track man. "my mind is a minefield bitch" is the only time your flow was off beat-ish but everything else was good. and yea every line of my verse is like a double/triple entendre. matter fact one of them's an accident LMFAO i was just listening "make 'em all shoo like a man inside a sweatshop" then the next word is "fly" and that song "shoo fly don't bother me" holy shit i literally just caught that. i'm a beast.

Collab of the Century.

yeah man,I had this for idk how long just listening every once in a while, waiting on the full tape, and I just recently caught your "outline you" and "out LINE" you

[akkucc]

Deezy mac's verse was really good, I think his voice get mixed very well that's why i liked his verse. Stephen's flow was also good, his flow was different. I can't say much bout lyrics cause i didn't understand many lines. But your voice is very heavy. your second verse was better than the first

[Cli-City]

THis one is a banger...my nigga SK came though..and Mac killed it as usual..

[ATLien666]

SK, your flow and lyrics are good, but your delivery and voice make your songs so unlistenable, imo. it sounds like you're reading an audiobook to me or some shit. Mac's flow is so fucking versatile, it's dope as fuck and your punchlines are great. I haven't heard a bad song from you ever. Overall, this isn't horrible or even bad, but Mac's verse really, really, really, really stands out.

4/5

[StephenKING]

SK, your flow and lyrics are good, but your delivery and voice make your songs so unlistenable, imo. it sounds like you're reading an audiobook to me or some shit. Mac's flow is so fucking versatile, it's dope as fuck and your punchlines are great. I haven't heard a bad song from you ever. Overall, this isn't horrible or even bad, but Mac's verse really, really, really, really stands out.

4/5

I've heard the boring delivery thing before, im working on that, never heard the whole voice thing though but I guess thats cool cause everyvoice isn't for everyone haha niggas still dont listen to Wayne cause of his voice, I think Macs verse stands out on account of his delivery I feel like were on par on the lyrics and entendres if you get mine, but Macs verse was amazing...

(the yawn at the beginning was purposeful so idk if you think my first verse was unlistenable or everything I do but it's meant to be a little boring then mac comes in and kills it, then I come in and do the same hopefully)

Thanks for the feed

[mykill]

the pitched voice at the end is too deep... needs better mixing...

overall good bars. you two are crazy lyricists so I'm not surprised. Mac's verse was great, flawless execution. There were a few hiccups on SK's end, but he still executed his flow well. Wish there was more "fun" and liveliness in his voice, but sometimes listening to him I think it works. Drakes one of the most monotone people in the world when he raps, but ppl love em. so

[StephenKING]

sorry.. butt... bump

[MC_Crary]

Deez fuckin murdered this one. King brought it to though. Still needs a bit of work on the delivery though. You guys sound good together. Lyrically I dont think your got murked like the rest of us do when on a track with Deezy lol. Good one guys.

[StephenKING]

Deez fuckin murdered this one. King brought it to though. Still needs a bit of work on the delivery though. You guys sound good together. Lyrically I dont think your got murked like the rest of us do when on a track with Deezy lol. Good one guys.

Just waiting on people to notice that, like, no offense to Deezy of course, thats the homie, and his verse was great, and lyrically it was great, Deezy is an all around better artist than me with delivery and everything, but lyrically im on his level at least... just sayin :/

[DeezyMac]

yall be making it seem like i'm the best rapper in the studio nshit man and that everyone else has to try and be like me. lol nah. i'm just a rapper lol.