Jay Bell - R.I.P To The Beat

[KingEz514]

Did this a while back (Jan. 2012) so I wouldn't say this is where I'm at lyrically but friends been buggin' me to drop this so here it goes..

First time that I'm posting a song here lol, feedback please.

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...gn-myself.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ck-please.html

[KingEz514]

I don't get why YouTube embed isn't working for me but whatever, click the link and check it out.

[mykill]

Mixing on the verse interesting. Sounds good though. Lyrics are decent. Punches dont have that "OOOOOOOOOO SNAP!" factor, but their consistent and still good. Some of it's reachin' but eh. Still works. Good freestyle over a great beat.

Overall: 4/5

[jmoney850]

I feel the beat and the punchlines, pretty dope. The punchlines are what kept me listening through the whole track. Quality was a little iffy. but overall it was a decent freestyle over a good beat.

Overall: 3.8/5

[KingEz514]

Mixing on the verse interesting. Sounds good though. Lyrics are decent. Punches dont have that "OOOOOOOOOO SNAP!" factor, but their consistent and still good. Some of it's reachin' but eh. Still works. Good freestyle over a great beat.

Overall: 4/5

Thanks, I appreciate it. & I agree that I reached for some of them lol but as I said I don't feel this is where I'm at lyrically right now.

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I feel the beat and the punchlines, pretty dope. The punchlines are what kept me listening through the whole track. Quality was a little iffy. but overall it was a decent freestyle over a good beat.

Overall: 3.8/5

Thanks man. & yeah the dude that mixed this tried something with it and I asked him to switch it up but I think he lost my files or something I don't know.

[Laudacity93]

I like the track the flow was a lil choppy at times, and the way the vocals are mixed make you shine like shyne a lil bit. 3.5/5

[KingEz514]

I like the track the flow was a lil choppy at times, and the way the vocals are mixed make you shine like shyne a lil bit. 3.5/5

Lol, damn I sound like Shyne?

But yeah I know the flow was iffy at some points, thanks for the feedback.

[DreezyBaby]

ayeeee this song aint that bad frfr.... 3.5/5

lyrically it was decent, but your flow stayed on point. and the beat was cool.

[KingEz514]

ayeeee this song aint that bad frfr.... 3.5/5

lyrically it was decent, but your flow stayed on point. and the beat was cool.

Thanks.

[Laudacity93]

Lol, damn I sound like Shyne?

But yeah I know the flow was iffy at some points, thanks for the feedback.

just the way its mixed.

[DatWeezy]

flow was a lil off sometimes but at other times it was really good. Consistency the key. But I did enjoy some of the punches n the way you delivered them..

Overall i'd give this a 3.5/5

Good for a freestyle tho man.

[Gibbsy]

love the laid back beat, sound some old school lupe, kick push comes to mind, flow is tight yo!, mixing could be a lil better its difficult to pick up everything, the lyrics are niceee!! and your delivery is smooth but ide of liked to hear a lil switch up nice work tho man keep droppin!! 4/5