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    I had to seperate the line's editing this but this is a verse i wrote when i got frustrated with something that happend <-- mispell.. But Just check it out and you could probably get a picture :


    I'm tryna figure out how the world really is,
    when you got nigga's tryna be all up in my bizz
    when the media ask question bout kell'z how you is
    i just say money on my mind and that's the way how i live.
    Relationship problem's always keep me stressed
    the last girl tried to leave me
    when i gave her something to put on her neck
    a wise man once told me never fall into love
    when it can easily pull you out when ya girl's
    tryna swallow another brother's Jizz
    i had to question that statement because adultry
    Put's people mostly in the courthouse
    or bad nigga's underground,
    Shit.. Im surprised my old boy is still up and walking around.
    I never cheated on a girl
    and never broke a heart
    until those days where i just had to find love and never couldnt stop
    High school sweethearts to one stands
    How many time's have you ever seen shone's participate in the game
    of laying on of hand's.
    I Look at the game, and see how it is.
    Love, Sex, Pain, Betrayel aint really what im in to..
    Baby if you love him you would probably stay with him too
    truth be told, most nigga's into sex, me, im just used to having
    long relationships.
    Athlete's to Sports
    Rapper's into Music
    Girl it's alot of money so idk
    why you really choosin.

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    Re: Express Yourself...

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    • #3
      Re: Express Yourself...

      Damn, Who pissed you off? Lol, mines is about some god damn asshole tried to take my girl away from me but i tried to hide my jealousy.. and see if my girl would have to choose.

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      • #4
        Re: Express Yourself...

        Originally posted by LegendarySwag
        Damn, Who pissed you off? Lol, mines is about some god damn asshole tried to take my girl away from me but i tried to hide my jealousy.. and see if my girl would have to choose.
        lmaoo... i jst said wt came 2 mind
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        • #5
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          BLAh, had a long court today
          provation for a year and a S>A>D class. OH YAY!
          more than 500 dollar fine, agust 18, due the next day
          all just for a fucken dumb spray
          ..yeah im a dumb young tagger
          got caught up in my dumb young swagger
          all the fines and fees pierced me like a dagger
          and da judge told me 2keep away from red raggers
          ...no joke real story
          now im a delinquent, lost my glory
          my life should be explained, in the show maury
          i just want all HQ to feel for me
          ..i know i made poor choices but don't i deserve a second chance?
          i will never repeat da same bullshit like a second glance
          you think i kan pay all this money with my finance
          i dont even work, only option is advance
          ..damn homies my stress level to da fullest
          im 15, shit yu can bet my life aint da dullest
          just waiting for my P.O, to tell me what da rules is
          i just wanna drown, show me where da pools is!
          im a dumbass, ask the cops theyll show you who da fool is
          and yeah i use to think i was MR.COOL wiz!
          ..i guess you can call me Mr.WALKING FELONY
          i am a delinquant, show me where da cell gon be
          all because my older friend, peer pressured me
          ..HQ FAM i just opend up 2 you guys
          believe me, i am truthful I aint telling you LIES
          i aint tryna be MR.think im all WISE
          im a just a 15 year old DUMBASS saying goodbye's


          wow [no joke] i feel like i just got a big load of my shoulders
          by speaking bout my lame ass day in court and all my problems
          all this is true n shit [no joke]
          "Yeah I be with dem different hoes, No i mean dem different hoes"

          chek out my battle: who wins: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/vie...p=20419#p20419

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          • #6
            Re: Express Yourself...

            lets go

            um dont do it to be funny i do it for the money
            hustle all year if its rainy or its sunny
            ya girl give the best head so u cant call her a dummy
            i got more hip hop than a muthafuckin bunny
            stop rappin bout feelings cuz nobody cares
            thats what the world taught me, talk, nobody hears
            they dont give a fuck, and i dont neither
            thats why wayne scream fuck the world, not the poeple

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            • #7
              Re: Express Yourself...

              Swag and js - refreshing lines. It's much easier to overlook rhythmic errors when you aren't just writing bullshit.
              shadow and spencer - lol u

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              • #8
                Re: Express Yourself...

                Originally posted by Patriarch
                Swag and js - refreshing lines. It's much easier to overlook rhythmic errors when you aren't just writing bullshit.
                shadow and spencer - lol u
                u again? smh....
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                • #9
                  Re: Express Yourself...

                  Shadow, you make it too easy. Your rap is remarkably formulaic:

                  The only things you ever mention are cars, money, women, and how you rap. 99% of your lines begin with "I'm", "And", or "Cuz". You construct your rhymes by first picking one of the preceding themes, and then constructing some sort of absurd simile with it. It's just the same crap over and over. If you don't believe me, re-read what you posted.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Express Yourself...

                    Originally posted by Patriarch
                    Swag and js - refreshing lines. It's much easier to overlook rhythmic errors when you aren't just writing bullshit.
                    shadow and spencer - lol u

                    lol u

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                    • #11
                      Re: Express Yourself...

                      I wasn't dissing you Swag; sorry if that wasn't clear.

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                      • #12
                        Re: Express Yourself...

                        Originally posted by Patriarch
                        I wasn't dissing you Swag; sorry if that wasn't clear.

                        yeah swag he actually gave us props..
                        he said Swag and JS refreshing lines...
                        "Yeah I be with dem different hoes, No i mean dem different hoes"

                        chek out my battle: who wins: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/vie...p=20419#p20419

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