Express Yourself...

[LegendarySwag]

Re: Express Yourself...

I wasn't dissing you Swag; sorry if that wasn't clear.

yeah swag he actually gave us props..
he said Swag and JS refreshing lines...

sorry, i got a mass headache, lack of sleep. and i was stressed out earlier today, i cant think clearly.

[js11]

Re: Express Yourself...

I wasn't dissing you Swag; sorry if that wasn't clear.

yeah swag he actually gave us props..
he said Swag and JS refreshing lines...

sorry, i got a mass headache, lack of sleep. and i was stressed out earlier today, i cant think clearly.

ifeel yah bro..
ihad court today fukk they didnt go
easy on me...

[Slags]

Re: Express Yourself...

Alright, this white boy gon spit a verse cuz he bored as fuck
got those giovanna shoes sittin on tha navi truck
these ma fuckas tryin to get at my albino ass, i say good luck
now listin to my native american flow
my shawnee heritage is all up in this hoe
whoops i meant to say squaw
fuck w/ me u'll see what this tomahawk fo
Reppin PA: home of the sickest flo
Cassidy n my boy Wiz control this land
Pennsylvania n the word championship go hand and hand
count tha rings bitch, thats right six
n you never knew this young college student had skills this sick
Shippensburg stand up, then hand me a natty then chill tha fuck down
bitch u a one beer queer, hand me that liquor, you've had enough clown
this rhyme is so scattered
but fuck w/ me you'll hear shots fired
and then watch all those fake bitches scatter
aight, imma stop w/ this before you mind becomes shattered
from being blown apart like Hank Hill's dad's legs
and just remember who just spit this shit: tha name is slags

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Express Yourself...

Shadow, you make it too easy. Your rap is remarkably formulaic:

The only things you ever mention are cars, money, women, and how you rap. 99% of your lines begin with "I'm", "And", or "Cuz". You construct your rhymes by first picking one of the preceding themes, and then constructing some sort of absurd simile with it. It's just the same crap over and over. If you don't believe me, re-read what you posted.

still smh... ur critizing does not mean a dogs shit to me. if u were my manager or the person paying me to do shows and meetings and tapes,then i'd listen until then whatever u say is casper the friendly ghost 2 me. good job on nothing.

[LegendarySwag]

Re: Express Yourself...

Keep it Going..

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Express Yourself...

Keep it Going..

[Slags]

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how was that random shit i just put out there? gimme pointers, don't say ' your white, stop' either

[Young Luc]

Re: Express Yourself...

nice verse Slags

[Patriarch]

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still smh... ur critizing does not mean a dogs shit to me. if u were my manager or the person paying me to do shows and meetings and tapes,then i'd listen until then whatever u say is casper the friendly ghost 2 me. good job on nothing.

To be honest, I don't believe that anyone would ever pay you for the shit you regurgitate. If you were actually making money with rap then you wouldn't be posting your garbage on a lil wayne fan site.

[Dreezy Baby]

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still smh... ur critizing does not mean a dogs shit to me. if u were my manager or the person paying me to do shows and meetings and tapes,then i'd listen until then whatever u say is casper the friendly ghost 2 me. good job on nothing.

To be honest, I don't believe that anyone would ever pay you for the shit you regurgitate. If you were actually making money with rap then you wouldn't be posting your garbage on a lil wayne fan site.

dude would u get the off my dick already fuck. if i like lil wayne's music i do. fuck u questioning me 4. why the fuck u on the site? no life? huh? i aint all on u commenting back to every post with something bad to say damn fuck off a nigga back dude

[Patriarch]

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This has nothing to do with you liking Lil Wayne's music. I'm not sure how you could take that out of what I said. My point is that you don't see successful artists parading around on the internet, posting lyrics for free on a fan site of another artist. It just doesn't happen. Therefore, you are just as much of a nobody as the rest of us.

Really, I'm picking on you right now because you're a prime target. You claim to be a blood, but wear blue clothes. You claim to be some hotshot signed artist, yet you post stuff that half the people on this forum could put to shame. And to top it all off, you insist upon using italics in every single post to further convey to everyone just how much of a douchebag you are.

I wouldn't be criticizing your lyrics unless there was something to legitimately criticize.

[Dreezy Baby]

Re: Express Yourself...

This has nothing to do with you liking Lil Wayne's music. I'm not sure how you could take that out of what I said. My point is that you don't see successful artists parading around on the internet, posting lyrics for free on a fan site of another artist. It just doesn't happen. Therefore, you are just as much of a nobody as the rest of us.

Really, I'm picking on you right now because you're a prime target. You claim to be a blood, but wear blue clothes. You claim to be some hotshot signed artist, yet you post stuff that half the people on this forum could put to shame. And to top it all off, you insist upon using italics in every single post to further convey to everyone just how much of a douchebag you are.

I wouldn't be criticizing your lyrics unless there was something to legitimately criticize.

U know what i aint even gone respond to no more of ur post towards to me. Cuz honestly i have no problem with u. bt b4 i do that i'll clear some shit up. i dont "CLAIM" to be a blood. 2nd i dont "CLAIM" to be a hotshot artist if u fuckin read what i posted i said ur not my manager or no1 to me i dont even know ur real name for u 2 judge me. 3rd if using italics is being a "DOUCHEBAG" u obviously have problems. 4th wtf does wearing blue have to be with being a blood? u obviously know nothing about "gangs" to even say some1 is a FAKE Blood or crip or whatever. fuck it im done. i've wasted enough time responding 2 u. from now i wont tho u can continue to post something back to whatever i say. just remember its not helping u complete whatever ur trying to complete by downing someone else.