Checkmate The Gr8 - Major University (Feat. Silver Surfer)

[Checkmatemuzick]

"Broaden your horizons...learn to think out the box! Be Different...every song aint bout bitches, money, & glocks"

NEW MUSIC!!! This one is called "Major University" off my new project check out...if you not a fan or havent liked wat I put out in the past...you might wanna check dis one out, If u been fuckn wit me & my music...U GON LUV IT!

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[Tha Professor]

hella dope in terms of the whole song, sick beat and vocals are mixed/mastered well. the first guy spittin, silver, killed your verse. but u killed the hook. sounds like legit shit

3.9/5

[pgathriller]

That beat is smooth -- really diggin that brass

Flow is on point -- I don't really analyze lyrics but the mix on this is dope and the delivery and charisma you guys have on the mic is dope

Could maybe use a little more vocal effects like doubling/ad-libs, particularly on the hook I think it would really help but overall this is a smooth jam man -- nice work.

Edit: not sure if you're the first dude or second but sounds like the 2nd dude has some nice doubling/adlibs, the first guy just needs to do a similar thing + more on the hook