What do ya'll think of this song made to one of my beats? [Pop-Space kinda beat]

[pgathriller]

If you're used to my gritty kinda beats -- this is something wayy different; this was back when I was first starting to come out with beats and this was an original I made (i.e. no samples)

(btw, it's not your computer -- there's randomly no sound for the first 10 seconds)


Anyway, dude is only 14 -- so keep that in mind -- and it's probably the best I've heard for this particularly beat; just wondering what ya'll think of it [mostly looking for feed on the beat since it's so different than what most of ya'll have probably heard from me] (don't expect to be relapsing into this style so if you're down with my newer shit, no need to worry -- definitely got more of that coming)


[Feed Links]
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...dropbread.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ole-wayne.html

[Flame Beats]

good beat, nice hook, decent flow.

vocals could be turned down slightly and his voice is too soft. it's as it they turned it up because he was too quiet.

[pgathriller]

good beat, nice hook, decent flow.

vocals could be turned down slightly and his voice is too soft. it's as it they turned it up because he was too quiet.

prop'd for the feed


didn't notice what you said about the vocals being pulled up but I'm hearing it now -- interesting, didn't notice that

[dodson495]

yea i noticed it too

[JSmooth]

I liked the beat. you can go a few different ways with it which is good. the actual song itself is decent i say probably around a 3.5/5. I didnt really notice the vocals issue though

[mykill]

Mixing sounds pretty good. Concept is good as well. He's got decent mic and "stage" presence, but his lyrics are kind empty and elementary. But ya know, its a pop song and they kinda fit the bill. For 14 this guy isnt that bad. Flow seems pretty natural.

Overall: 3.5/5

[pgathriller]

gotta spread for JSmooth and Mykill


I actually liked it more than I thought I would; at first I didn't like it all that much but then the hook started to sound better; it's nothing spectacular but yeah, for 14 it definitely ain't bad