RIP - Two Sides

[rip222]

feed 1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ole-wayne.html
feed 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ulez-crew.html

Check my other song out if u liked the first one

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PczPORa_1QQ

[mykill]

Good effort. You need to more confident on the mic. Remember, mic presence is big and keeps the listener paying attention. The second Rick Ross gets on the mic people know he's gonna sound like the largest dude in the room, gruntin' and soundin' confident. Not saying you have to grunt, but you need to at least sound confident on the mic.

Lyrics were ok. I think you can do better though.

Overall: 2.8/5

[dodson495]

u just gotta work alil bit more harder

[Tha Professor]

I kind of get the flow you were trying to go for, but i think the accent held u back (..deez niggaz won hold me back) because of the lack of energy. Just figure out how to flow wit tha accent and it'll sound dope

[ATLien666]

Your delivery is pretty boring, but if you're a new rapper, I'm not surprised. Delivery is something that comes after doing a couple times. Your flow is pretty good, you just sound bored. Lyrics were okay, you got potential. keep posting and keep it up.

3/5

[pgathriller]

flow is way too relaxed; and the vocals just sound kinda muffled and sitting a little too far back in the mix (might be too much reverb or something -- not really sure but the vocals just lack any brightness and sound like they're being held back)

throw some adlibs and doubles in there too to give your vocals more presence and fullness; it'll help bring your flow to life a little more but also just try to have more energy on the mic and try to getting a cleaner recording process cause this could be dope if the mix was solid and you had a little more energy in there but, at this point, it sounds kinda dull tbh

[CCB007]

AKKUCC????????? IS THAT YOU??

[KidComet]

You need to work on the flow.

Its jammable tho, my head is nodding, Its not terrible at all, I dont see what they talking about, you may wanna come with more delivery and more confidence tho, but you have the basic structure of a rhyme scheme down,

I think the beats the only reason why i kept listening tho lol

[Laudacity93]

I kinda hear lupe fiasco with less mic presence I have to agree with Mykill 100%.. I suggest practicing the verse to the point where you pretty much have them memorized. Then going for it. 3/5

[rip222]

I kinda hear lupe fiasco with less mic presence I have to agree with Mykill 100%.. I suggest practicing the verse to the point where you pretty much have them memorized. Then going for it. 3/5

Lol thanks for Lupe Fiasco comparison.

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Thanks y'all for comments. Appreciate that! I'll go harder next time

[Gibbsy]

the beats fire, i like the laid back jazzy feel to it, the only problem i had is yoru drop was a lil weak, the fllow is good but very simple and the lyrics aren't up to par with sucha a simple flow, the mixing is okay but it sounds plain its also hard to understand everything yoru saying too, im not sure if its ure accent but overall its not a bad track, 3/5

[DreezyBaby]

Ahhhhhh. ^^^ its cool but yeah you just TOO laid back... put more feeling into your flow trust me itll sound way better..lyrics are okay and the beat aint bad. I was feeling this song tbh , 3/5 just put more into it next time