instrumental made by JL & Gardz

[lilweezyfan]

A lil beat my homie and me made, please take a listen
http://www.sharebeast.com/0bn25zlkh5zl


1.http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha-studio/45233-j-a-i-no-worries-rmx-featuring-jrud3.html
2.http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...z-pull-up.html

[TupacShaquer]

This isn't bad lol those beginning drums got annoying and repetitive but the hook was pretty dope

[lilweezyfan]

This isn't bad lol those beginning drums got annoying and repetitive but the hook was pretty dope

Thanks

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

goood for just starting out, but i wouldnt rap on this, you should add more stuff






























brrrr

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

how did it take 2 people to make this?

[Flame Beats]

it's all right. what did you use for the strings at the beginning? Philharmonik, Nexus, Purity or some soundfont?

[mykill]

Not bad... Strings sound good. Piano isnt bad. Drum roll is awkward. The pauses work. The change up isnt that bad. I think really you just need some better kits to improve the overall sound and get some snares/kicks/hats that sound more pro.

Keep at it homes.

[pgathriller]

That piano sounds real basic; like it's right out a MIDI kit or something and imo those drums are way too loud compared to the volume of the piano

Layer up that piano -- actually, scrap that piano and layer up some better pianos (try Nexus maybe?); the repeating hit snares get annoying, it's like you threw in some ghost notes to give the snare some more rhythm but the ghost notes are the same velocity as the snare itself so it's just a shitload of snare haha


I'm assuming you're just starting out and using only stock sounds -- invest in some higher quality sounds with brighter, deeper tonalities and presence and layer, layer, layer to give your sounds a more prominent tone

how did it take 2 people to make this?

lol

[THA GR8 M8]

Youngin', this really isn't that bad. I kinda fux with it lowkey. The drums were the only part I wasn't feeling but it didn't take away from the beat. I could see someone rapping over this tbh. 3.5/5