"This Is My Moment" - Produced By J.@.i (NEW BEAT)

[Dezi-Do Rhyt]

http://soundcloud.com/dezi-do-rhyt/d...ment-type-beat

This is a new beat I just made, I kinda based it off "I'm On One" DJ Khaled and "My Moment" By DJ Drama.

Still new on beat making so please give me feedback on what should be improved and what you like about it. Thank You

[dodson495]

its ok for starters

[mykill]

Some of the instrumentation is good. The snare is ok, but that piano sounds like a old school casio keyboard from preschool. Maybe switch it to a grand piano? IN TOTAL, the beat is 1/2 bad. I could see someone around here spitting on this. You might want to change that snare too. Sounds too generic. Try to find something that sounds a little more natural.... Good composition too...

[pgathriller]

I was diggin that synth in the intro


then the beat came in and I wasn't feeling it


Everything that comes in (drums plus those weird glass bell things or whatever) are insanely sharp and loud in the mix.


Mix is really cluttered and muddy with whatever those bells are, they fill up the mix wayy too much -- maybe turn the release down a ton or turn the polyphony to 1 or mayyyybe 2 but something about those needs to be fixed imo