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Akkucc Survivor(Right above it remix)
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I'm gonna be completely honest I really don't like it. The flow needs work as well as lyrics..When you record as if you're writing keep in mind your audience. If i was driving and heard this on the radio I would be like hell naw not trying to be harsh or anything. but you knew what it sound like before you uploaded it. Practice practice..1/5
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Originally posted by Laudacity93 View PostI'm gonna be completely honest I really don't like it. The flow needs work as well as lyrics..When you record as if you're writing keep in mind your audience. If i was driving and heard this on the radio I would be like hell naw not trying to be harsh or anything. but you knew what it sound like before you uploaded it. Practice practice..1/5
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dude....i don't wanna be harsh so i'm not even going to mention your flow or your accent or anything like that.
but your lyrics man...they're not good. i don't know how much pride you got left, but when you write a song, try to get help from someone who's better at writing, just to balance it out and shit.
i'm sure someone on this forum would love to help you. then you can start working on all that other shit
much love, peace.
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Originally posted by UnknownP View Postdude....i don't wanna be harsh so i'm not even going to mention your flow or your accent or anything like that.
but your lyrics man...they're not good. i don't know how much pride you got left, but when you write a song, try to get help from someone who's better at writing, just to balance it out and shit.
i'm sure someone on this forum would love to help you. then you can start working on all that other shit
much love, peace.
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