SM Maniac - The Beginning

[TupacShaquer]

This is a rough draft of the intro song to my tape, I wasn't planning on releasing any of this until the tape dropped but fuck it you mfs arent even probably going to listen to the tape as a whole/ skip songs so I'm thinking of just releasing them one by one in due time.

The Beginning (Rough Draft)

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[Cli-City]

Dopest shit you ever dropped...just finished listening to this earlier today after work...

[TupacShaquer]

Dopest shit you ever dropped...just finished listening to this earlier today after work...

More shit to be dropped as well Once you're done with that verse I'll release my nukes

[StephenKING]

waiting on the tape as a whole, I'm behind i gotta check the and PrettyFlacko's tape out, and anyone else i've looked into that ive missed

[KidComet]

Loving this beat man, Real nice.

I see your gettin better!!!! Dude hell ya! This put a smile on my face hearing someone improve right before my eyes! haha.
Flow Slippin here and there, but your actually becomming jammable man! Before I couldnt even stand to listen to you but now you gotten to a point where i can listen thru a song man.

I give this song a good 7/10 man. Production is nice. Mixing isnt the best, but u said its the rough. Lyrics and Flow need some improvement. Like you should look up rhyme scemes and stuff.

[mykill]

I dont like the hook....

Multies and wordplay sound decent. You have an out-of-the-box flow similar to Prof E, but I like it because its different. I think that you can do that hook a little better though and it would carry the track well. Right now it sounds like stop-n-go traffic at rush hour. It needs to be a bit more smooth with the flow.

[ATLien666]

Drop the tape, bruh. You're improving a lot. You always have a different subject matter and I fucks with. mixing isn't that good, but it's the rough draft, so whatever. Your flow is getting better, but like Mykill said, you need to make it smoother. Your delivery is good, though.

[MC_Crary]

I'll wait for the album man. Need to hear it as a whole.

[TupacShaquer]

I'll wait for the album man. Need to hear it as a whole.

The day my tape drop is the day Romney gets to step into the white house.

Not anytime soon...

[MC_Crary]

Ok, I listened.

Simplistic hook works for me. You've made great strides in the flow department. You're so much more understandable now. The clarity brings you to a whole other level. No it's time to work on the mixing. Learn some new effects and such to make your music sound more professional Good intro.

[TupacShaquer]

waiting on the tape as a whole, I'm behind i gotta check the and PrettyFlacko's tape out, and anyone else i've looked into that ive missed

Only is one , only is one , only is one, and thats myself , lived a life not needing help

Loving this beat man, Real nice.

I see your gettin better!!!! Dude hell ya! This put a smile on my face hearing someone improve right before my eyes! haha.
Flow Slippin here and there, but your actually becomming jammable man! Before I couldnt even stand to listen to you but now you gotten to a point where i can listen thru a song man.

I give this song a good 7/10 man. Production is nice. Mixing isnt the best, but u said its the rough. Lyrics and Flow need some improvement. Like you should look up rhyme scemes and stuff.

Appreciate it

I dont like the hook....

Multies and wordplay sound decent. You have an out-of-the-box flow similar to Prof E, but I like it because its different. I think that you can do that hook a little better though and it would carry the track well. Right now it sounds like stop-n-go traffic at rush hour. It needs to be a bit more smooth with the flow.

Really? I thought the hook was alright , i got better shit in store tho.

Drop the tape, bruh. You're improving a lot. You always have a different subject matter and I fucks with. mixing isn't that good, but it's the rough draft, so whatever. Your flow is getting better, but like Mykill said, you need to make it smoother. Your delivery is good, though.

Appreciate it , but I'm 50/50 right now .

[akkucc]

Nice track. But Mixing is not good.