SM Maniac - The Beginning

[Gibbsy]

yo man i dig the beat the beat is fire has a smooth vibe to it, deffo a story telling beat, your flow is decent tho and your inflections are much better than they av been before, the mixing is better than ive heard from you before too, i find it hard to understand everything you say but thats cool, cuz its hard for people to understand me to ahah, hooks decent aswell, but you coulda flipped the hook up a lil more decent track best ive heard of you, 4/5

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

hook is dope to me, word to Jessica Simpson, you improved more than ive ever seen anyone before (except for me of course lol)

[Snapy Dee]

I like this man, could definitely use improvement but it's nice. Some parts were hard for me to understand but lyrics are cool. Tight flow, especially on 01:40, wish you used that rhyme pattern for few more lines. The hook is not bad, i like the part when you say "It's only the beginning" but some other words sound rushed. Great beat choice, i love this beat lol.

[TupacShaquer]

hook is dope to me, word to Jessica Simpson, you improved more than ive ever seen anyone before (except for me of course lol)

I like this man, could definitely use improvement but it's nice. Some parts were hard for me to understand but lyrics are cool. Tight flow, especially on 01:40, wish you used that rhyme pattern for few more lines. The hook is not bad, i like the part when you say "It's only the beginning" but some other words sound rushed. Great beat choice, i love this beat lol.

One of the best feedbacks I've gotten from someone who usually doesn't go on here / is new. I'll be sure to check your shit out when I have time .