Rembrandt - Lullabies of the Lost, Verse 1 (SNIPPET)

[ATLien666]

Pushed the mixtape back since, yk, it wasn't done. work and school and shit is limiting my writing/recording time. I'm also trying not to drop every song I record, so Holly will probably be the last 'til the mixtape. Hm, intro song, I think. Possibly, idk.

But here:
some shit.mp3



feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...beginning.html

[mykill]

outta the box...

but I like it. There are some parts where the strength in you voice dips, but other than that the flow is sound.

[ATLien666]

outta the box...

but I like it. There are some parts where the strength in you voice dips, but other than that the flow is sound.

right on, bruh. I'mma either release the full version of this or Holly this month.

[KidComet]

I love the beat, I like weird beats like this haha.

You got a good rapping voice, ur lucky, You sound like my friend Jerrel ahah,
This track is chill, the voice and beat compliment each other. Your flow might have slipped up a lil when u sped it up near the end but thats about it. I would jam this when you finish for sure tho.

[ATLien666]

I love the beat, I like weird beats like this haha.

You got a good rapping voice, ur lucky, You sound like my friend Jerrel ahah,
This track is chill, the voice and beat compliment each other. Your flow might have slipped up a lil when u sped it up near the end but thats about it. I would jam this when you finish for sure tho.

Right on and yeah, I kinda rushed recorded this just to put something out as a placeholder. I'll be sure to finish this up soon, though.

[BlakeJay]

Comet was right you do have a good rapping voice..beat is nice..flow a was good except for the minor slip at the end...had some clever lyrics as well! Should be dope when you drop the whole song

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

fuck you find this beat from? that shit too hard. anyway i agree u got an ill rap voice. this shit got me mad tho, right when i start crankking the shit stop smh lol

[akkucc]

I like the beat, Song is good too, But i think that your mixing is not good Your voice is Very loud.