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  • #1

    Tranquil - Jaded

    Yo whatsup everyone, been gone for ages, had alot of personal shit to get through, this track sums it up a little bit. Give it a listen and tell me what you think, i look forward to seeing peoples reactions

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  • #2
    vocals sound weird.
    interesting accent you got.
    solid flow, nice change in tempo with the rapid fast flow.
    serious subject matter.
    decent hook, who did it??
    EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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    • #3
      Thanks for the feed man its not the best just dropped it as a quick yo im back type track, im 8 songs deep into my mixtape so be on the look out
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      • #4
        this shit aint even that bad lol for the first thing i listened to back on here... Lyrics 3.5 the hook was the best part of song. Your flow dec though keep it up. overall 3/5

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        • #5
          The flow is nice, tight lyrics too. Emotion is on point, wish you used more of that anger in your voice throughout he track, like you did at the end...i think it would make the track more interesting. The beat is dope of course, along with that hook.
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          • #6
            Cheers the both of you, and Snapy Dee, I didn't really want to get angry on the track, i kinda wanted to keep it mono tone type thing with a little bit of aggression
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            • #7
              Flow - Dope, your flow has always been dope. Even back to a year ago or so back. Flowed smooth over this.
              Lyrics - Pretty good for the track. Would be nice for you to step up the lyrics a bit more tho. More multies, internal rhymes, etc...
              Other - Refreshing to hear some new shit from you. Quality sounds good. Beat is dope as well.
              Overall - 4/5. Keep it up man!



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              • #8
                Cheers man, I didn't really wanna go all out with lyrics on this track, it was more of shit just coming out of my brain and just writting it without even thinking, I was in a weird mood when I wrote this song. Thanks for the feed man, really appreciate it, and I'm working on my mixtape that I actually am dropping (haha) gonna book studio time and shit soon so yeah, I'm here for good!
                Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

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                • #9
                  Welcome back, yo!

                  This beat came with the hook right? Flow and delivery sound on point. Vocals sound a little low though. Where you from? I caught your accent. Lyrics are appropriate for the concept. You put together a pretty good comeback track. All that I can see that needs work in the volume of the vocals... Is this missing a verse or something? There was some considerable empty space on the beat... What's up with that?

                  Overall: 3.8/5

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