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  • (J)ames Books-Open Minded (Music Video) Recommended to watch while high.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U1sDA...ature=youtu.be








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    Last edited by KidComet; 11-12-2012, 07:40 PM.

  • #2
    Good shit.
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    • #3
      Can I get some feedback on this please

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      • #4
        What kind of music video is that? Did you just steal some anime episode or w.e that is and call it your music video? lmao.

        The songs alright, kind of hard me taking you serious with this god thing thooo

        But your good your good 3/5 . Didn't really like the hook , but it worked i guess.
        The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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        • #5
          Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
          What kind of music video is that? Did you just steal some anime episode or w.e that is and call it your music video? lmao.

          The songs alright, kind of hard me taking you serious with this god thing thooo

          But your good your good 3/5 . Didn't really like the hook , but it worked i guess.
          What hook?

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          • #6
            Originally posted by KidComet View Post
            What hook?
            :52 - 1:15?
            The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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            • #7
              Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
              :52 - 1:15?
              nah that was a flow switch

              its really depressing when i sit down and write about something real and close to my heart and people laugh at it man, i just want to be taken serious, whens the last time you seen me post something that was "trolling" man. Im going thru a lot right now. im not trollin now, nor well i ever be again.

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              • #8
                This was another good track. Did a good job of showing the contention you have for what's right and what's apparent "evil". Its an interesting motif that you've been using in your last few tracks, and its kept my attention. Some of the rhyme schemes were a bit elementary, but it works. Good job.

                Overall: 3.9/5

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