TIATIH- James Books,

[KidComet]

TIATIH- James Books by Deion James on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free


First attempt at singing a hook Prolly didnt fit the beat to well, but oh well

feedback please, thank u

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[THA GR8 M8]

Song wasn't bad at all. The hook was cool and decent as well. The background vocals on the hook really helped it all flow together.

If you would stop all of the trolling and other bullshit, mostly in this section, you would probably get more feedback. But most, even I, can't even take you serious with that shit you do. But you definitely deserve a little more attention for this song. I'd give it a 3.5/5.

[pgathriller]

Super chill vibes; although I wish the beat had a bit more power -- sounds a little thin to be honest

Still diggin the chillness tho, real nice somber track

Hook is alright, for your first time playing with singing it's not bad, but could be done better; I think you actually did a pretty good job but the processing on the vocals could be better to really give them some more warmth and get the harmonies a bit closer and tighter

Pretty dope track though man, I'm definitely diggin it

[KidComet]

Song wasn't bad at all. The hook was cool and decent as well. The background vocals on the hook really helped it all flow together.

If you would stop all of the trolling and other bullshit, mostly in this section, you would probably get more feedback. But most, even I, can't even take you serious with that shit you do. But you definitely deserve a little more attention for this song. I'd give it a 3.5/5.

Idk why the things I do on the forum have anything to do with the music I make, Its like if you meet Lil Wayne, and hes all goofy and shit and u see him skateboarding, and then he goes on a track talking bout "Make that glock go booom" some ish like that, would u take him serious?

[TupacShaquer]

This was pretty dope. Lmao and the reason I can't take you serious is not your music, its your christian way of life. Just maybe 3 months ago you were posted porn gifs in the forums , and just how rapidly you switched up seemed to unreal, even tho I doubt you're lying because if you were, TROLL OF THE YEAR. lol

[THA GR8 M8]

Idk why the things I do on the forum have anything to do with the music I make, Its like if you meet Lil Wayne, and hes all goofy and shit and u see him skateboarding, and then he goes on a track talking bout "Make that glock go booom" some ish like that, would u take him serious?

It's not that kinda shit. It's like when you will post on people's threads in this section saying "oh why do you even rap, you aren't good, you're only making music to just have the same 3 people on this foun listen to it, etc"

[mykill]

I think a lot of people around here are burned by your trolling days. Can't shit on people and think they'd care when you actually start making music again. That said, I provide feedback on your new songs now because you apparently STOPPED trolling. When you go back to trolling, I'll go back to ignoring you and posting Thank You Kid Comet memes....

Anyways, song was pretty tight. You have a decent ear for music, meaning that you can make complete tracks that arent just a bunch of "bang bang" and that mesh fluidly. The hook, verses, and beat all blend well. The singing isnt that bad really. You did a good job with the harmonies and the writing for the lyrics and hook was great. Out of selection of new stuff you've posted that I've listened to, I like this one the best. Great job. I could see this song being on a major label album (at least back in the 90s - early 2000s, before labels got too into commercial hits).

Overall: 4.3/5

[KidComet]

This was pretty dope. Lmao and the reason I can't take you serious is not your music, its your christian way of life. Just maybe 3 months ago you were posted porn gifs in the forums , and just how rapidly you switched up seemed to unreal, even tho I doubt you're lying because if you were, TROLL OF THE YEAR. lol

I feel ya man, but God changes people, ya feel me? Like yes I was one way before, but God opened up my eyes, it dont matter how I used to act, dont judge me by my past, I still be smoking weed, might see me cuss on this forum here and there, but my relationship with God himself became better, and that made my conscious about things I do become better, I think about my actions now before I do em

It's not that kinda shit. It's like when you will post on people's threads in this section saying "oh why do you even rap, you aren't good, you're only making music to just have the same 3 people on this foun listen to it, etc"

I feel ya bro, but on the real, The reason I post here is because you guys are really truthful with yall feedback for real man, like yall hit hard an be real with a nigga, I know if I can get atleast a 4/5 here then the song is iight. niggas on youtube be telling me the same thang on how the songs is good and blah blah blah, like im perfect, i know there shit to improve