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  • DIEZ - TurN On ThE LiGhTS ReMiX/FrEEsTyLE (Produced By: Mike WiLL Made It)

    "oh look another freestyle on a song from earlier this year, he's so late"
    idgaf, this another beat i wanted to hop on bitch.
    if i feel like rapping on the "yep in my white tee" beat, i will, and i just might remix that shit,
    becuz i wasnt rapping when that song came out, so i couldnt do a remix at that time, back in the early 2000's.....

    anyways, in this remix i did the stop, and record method that wayne uses.


    Listen to DIEZ - TURN ON THE LIGHTS (ITS GETTIN' DARK) FREESTYLE on Hulkshare - Free Music Streaming & Download

    lyrics:

    Verse 1:


    look,
    i aint lookin for her, but im lookin foreward,
    she got her ass to the back, butt behind close doors, her pussy opens,
    say she aint a crook, but my hearts gone, and i swear she stole it,
    lights out, okay look out now, where are we goin??
    down south, now, and it hotter than the weather, she aint never been wetter,
    pussy good as alphabet soup, and im down for every letter,
    smilin' like like somebody said cheese, cuz she know i got the chedda,
    but im 2 horny, i could fuck her like 4eva,
    man i swear that we was fuckin all day,
    and them pussy walls was tight, nothin like no hallways,
    i work em hard like jose is what them hoes say,
    then i knock her lights out like k.o...... o.k. .........shawty turn on the lights......

    Verse 2:


    turn on the lights, is what i told the bill collectors when the rent was due,
    didnt pay it on time but i intended to.
    in a coupe, top down, and the tint is blue, but aint nothin sad about,
    but haters mad about it.
    niggas still cant see me, hows that for a visual??
    instead they try to block yo shine, thats just how niggas do
    god said let there be light somewhere in genesis,
    so im trynna let my light shine on the world like he did the shit,
    yall witnesses witness it.............

    can turn on the lights, imma find her even wit the lights missing, i got night vision
    plus lil shawty light skinned, redbone, bright bitches
    is what niggas tend to attend to, class in session.
    kinda condescending, thats the lesson,
    fuck the world, 2012........ last direction....
    fuck the world, 2012........ last erection.....


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    Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 11-21-2012, 06:56 AM.
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  • #2
    Dopeness...First verse was the craziest....

    "i work em hard like jose is what them hoes say,
    then i knock her lights out like k.o...... o.k. ...."
    Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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    • #3
      Aye This Song Go Hard AF, And Can I Get Download Link To It?

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
        Dopeness...First verse was the craziest....

        "i work em hard like jose is what them hoes say,
        then i knock her lights out like k.o...... o.k. ...."
        lol, thanks for the listen bro.
        i liked that line as well.

        Originally posted by Yung_Word View Post
        Aye This Song Go Hard AF, And Can I Get Download Link To It?
        "

        thanks bro, and to download just press the downward green arrow at the right side of the screen,
        or the large green rectangle with the arrow, thats says "download", at the left of the screen.
        EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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        • #5
          Damn that first verse, filled with some dope ass lines

          "smilin' like like somebody said cheese, cuz she know i got the chedda,"

          "
          pussy good as alphabet soup, and im down for every letter,"

          "
          then i knock her lights out like k.o...... o.k."

          4.5/5 , this shit is to dopee
          The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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          • #6
            Reminds me of future. Ur nigga voice sounds algud wit autotune tho gud shit those punchlines are krazy. Why cudnt it be you that got that deal instead of future for real

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            • #7
              Hmmm, Wasn't a fan of the Auto-Tune man but it didn't ruin the song. Lyrics were pretty good for the concept of the song, flow was a little choppy, but listening to the beat a 2nd time round you made it work!

              Lyrics 3.5 - 5
              Flow 3.5 - 5
              Overall 4-5
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              • #8
                Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
                Damn that first verse, filled with some dope ass lines

                "smilin' like like somebody said cheese, cuz she know i got the chedda,"

                "
                pussy good as alphabet soup, and im down for every letter,"

                "
                then i knock her lights out like k.o...... o.k."

                4.5/5 , this shit is to dopee
                'preciate the listen man.

                Originally posted by CCB007 View Post
                Reminds me of future. Ur nigga voice sounds algud wit autotune tho gud shit those punchlines are krazy. Why cudnt it be you that got that deal instead of future for real
                thanks bro, lol, i fux wit future though.
                he happend to have the right connects and get his promo on though, he hustlin hard. its all about the hustle.
                Originally posted by Explicit View Post
                Hmmm, Wasn't a fan of the Auto-Tune man but it didn't ruin the song. Lyrics were pretty good for the concept of the song, flow was a little choppy, but listening to the beat a 2nd time round you made it work!

                Lyrics 3.5 - 5
                Flow 3.5 - 5
                Overall 4-5
                'preciate that bruh,
                yeah i fucked wit the autotune becuz future used it on the original song. (dont know if you heard it or not.)
                and yeah, i intended the flow to be like that, cuz it made more sense after a few listens.
                Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 11-23-2012, 09:30 AM.
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                • #9
                  Good shit, the beat was made for you, even though its old AF, you shoulda been coverd this. Lol sike nah but you put my shit to shame
                  twitter.com/basedpoyo

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
                    Good shit, the beat was made for you, even though its old AF, you shoulda been coverd this. Lol sike nah but you put my shit to shame
                    lol, thanks bruh.

                    where's your version at???
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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                      Dopeness...First verse was the craziest....

                      "i work em hard like jose is what them hoes say,
                      then i knock her lights out like k.o...... o.k. ...."

                      RT tbh.
                      Them bars was crazy.

                      Lyrics went hard flow goes hard, ur voice is good, u got that nice black voice that a nigga like me be dying for, but i gotta work with what I have lol.

                      overall song 4/5

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                      • #12
                        One thing I always have a hard time with is punchlines. I'm just not as clever with that shit as many people around here are. You are definitely one of the top rappers around here with punchlines. In many of the tracks you do, there are always really good punchlines, but they are not just "white like an egg shell" or some basic shit. It's always something more witty.

                        This song is another example, where you "knock it out the park" with good punches. Recording was pretty good too. Why did you use autotune? To capture the same feel as Future did on his track? Coulda faded the end out instead of letting it run, but who cares.

                        Overall: 4/5

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