Julez_ R.2.R

[TheBestRapperAlive]

Not on the mixtape, just somthin i felt like putting out


*fixed

@Julez_PA
Watch out for R2R the mixtape coming soon...



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[tmillzy]

Bro what i gotta do to collab with you and thisshit mad wavy

[TheBestRapperAlive]

Bro what i gotta do to collab with you and thisshit mad wavy

Thanks man and i gotta a lot of stuff to work on but hit me up

[Tha Professor]

The flow sounds kind of corny sometimes (i dont really know how to explain that well), Lyrics are tight tho.

2.5/5

[CCB007]

Ur flow is perfect for beats like this. Work on realer lyrics tho. It seems like all rappers that are tryna come up say the exact same things like "im killing competition like....."
otherthanthat uv got definite potential to become a known MC.

What's the original song tho?? I remember i bumped that heaps but i fully forgot

[ATLien666]

What's the original song tho?? I remember i bumped that heaps but i fully forgot

Fuckin' Problem, I think.

But you got a nice flow, but your delivery is pretty stagnant. It's weird. It's like you're putting effort into it, but it still sounds the same, but whatever. Lyrically, eh. That's the bad part about doing remixes to songs like this, people are bound to draw comparisons to the original artists and you didn't really have one line better than any one line from the original song. I think, usually, if you can't come up with clever punch lines, you should at least have 1/2 clever lines in the song. Basically, this is average; you have potential.

3/5

[mykill]

1st

Fuckin' Problem, I think.

truuuuu. that's correct


2nd




3rd

Good mixtape track. Consistent with what you've been doing lately. Sounds too much like a lotta your other tracks. Might wanna change up how you do effects (mostly just hooks) in the future, but you're big time so keep doing what you're doing. Everything is kosher.

Overall: 4/5