My first hip hop beat

[ConnorFMatthews]

https://soundcloud.com/connor-matthe...t-hip-hop-beat

Feedback would be appreciated.

[Tha Professor]

on the 4th beat of the bar there should defiantly be something like a snare/clap/kick etc instead of a shaker. ending the 4th beat with the shaker would be cool for transitions (cool parts).

And you ain't dilla, you can't just release a 4bar loop like dat.

Keep working tho, "Repetition is the father of learning"

1.25/5

[ConnorFMatthews]

on the 4th beat of the bar there should defiantly be something like a snare/clap/kick etc instead of a shaker. ending the 4th beat with the shaker would be cool for transitions (cool parts).

And you ain't dilla, you can't just release a 4bar loop like dat.

Keep working tho, "Repetition is the father of learning"

1.25/5

Thanks for the feedback man!
I'll take it into account.

[Flame Beats]

way too repetitive. 2/5

[mykill]

sounds are that bad. snare needs to be more crisp. and yes, repetitive as fuck. needs another melody. good start, but whats more important....

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