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ANYWAYS...
Was really feelin this one. Reminds of Poyo a bit... cept without that P-raw Swag... But the concept reminds me of a Poyo song.
ANYWAYS AGAIN...
The hook needs more depth, both in recording and in substance. Some elements work, but it needs to be beefed up a bit. Some of the bars you used are very cliche, like the "bomb bitches like Baghdad" line... try to remember that after a while you say the same thing over and over in your rhymes as an artist... you have to constantly think of more creative ways to say things to sound unique. Feature's mixing volume was low.
Overall: 3.1/5
Was really feelin this one. Reminds of Poyo a bit... cept without that P-raw Swag... But the concept reminds me of a Poyo song.
ANYWAYS AGAIN...
The hook needs more depth, both in recording and in substance. Some elements work, but it needs to be beefed up a bit. Some of the bars you used are very cliche, like the "bomb bitches like Baghdad" line... try to remember that after a while you say the same thing over and over in your rhymes as an artist... you have to constantly think of more creative ways to say things to sound unique. Feature's mixing volume was low.
Overall: 3.1/5
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