MYKILL - Made You Look Freestyle

[mykill]

#F2

Nas - Made You Look

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Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1012690
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ml#post1012689

[Cli-City]

This beat makes every emcee step their game up..this is good...some lines are a bit off flow..but this one is dope...
Who do be shooting at though?

[Tha Professor]

ye this pretty dope, loved the switch ups in flow but some parts you kind of fucked it up. I love the creative approach dawg

[tmillzy]

"Been on the front so im where it all begin". I like it, your flow got throwed off just a lil bit but other than that its pretty solid. And dope lyrics.

Flow 3.0/5
Lyrics 4.5/5

[KidComet]

ur flow was much better on this, cause u put swag on it

i rate ur flow like 4/5 cause ur voice sounds good on this keep doing this and dont go back to the semi montotone voice like before (from the songs ive heard from u idk bout everything u did) but yeah maybe pitch ur voice up another octave when u spit it

[mykill]

Word.

I made this in like an hour, so that explains the imperfections. When I freestyle like this, it sounds more natural than my written rhymes. I think I'm too focused on getting all of the words right when I spit something written, it just comes out mega monotone. Meh.

Thanks for checking this out everyone.

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Who do be shooting at though?

anybody's a target

[jrthebeast]

It sounds like your focused on just getting the lyrics out as oppose to really flowing on the beat. But what your trying to get across in your lyrics was ight. It being a legendary beat though i felt you couldve came harder with a more complete hook as well. Overall 3.0/5 try going more original next time i would like to hear how you sound. Industry beats like this you have to come correct.

[mykill]

It sounds like your focused on just getting the lyrics out as oppose to really flowing on the beat. But what your trying to get across in your lyrics was ight. It being a legendary beat though i felt you couldve came harder with a more complete hook as well. Overall 3.0/5 try going more original next time i would like to hear how you sound. Industry beats like this you have to come correct.

one night, i just grabbed a random beat and spit some freestyle bars over... to my detriment, I chose this one lol.

Thanks for the feed mane.

[yungfamou5]

Lyrics were on point, flow was aahhh

But since dis is a FREEstyle it makes since for u 2 b off at times

3.5/5

[dOpeMitch]

stay on beat, sounds like you had a freestyle and tried to fit it on a song, but im just being criticial cause this is a classic track...

[DeezyMac]

i like the vibrato in your voice on this. sounds like if you threw autotune on this, it'd sound pitch perfect. the first couple bars were on point then it slowly started falling off around the "i came to win" and never really picked back up. everything after that seemed like a struggle.

[mykill]

i like the vibrato in your voice on this. sounds like if you threw autotune on this, it'd sound pitch perfect. the first couple bars were on point then it slowly started falling off around the "i came to win" and never really picked back up. everything after that seemed like a struggle.

word. yeah. this was totally a freestyle. no rehearse or written bars. meh. like i said earlier in the thread, i need to pick beats that arent "classic" when i do songs like this

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stay on beat, sounds like you had a freestyle and tried to fit it on a song, but im just being criticial cause this is a classic track...

understood. thanks.