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understandably, lyrically and flow wise, this isn't your best. but your delivery is a lot better on this and I liked that. This wasn't truly amazing or terrible, would be interesting to hear you write to this and keep the same delivery.
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Love this beat, every verse I've heard over this is dope. The only thing i can pick about this song, is that your vocals sound too clean, only because its a grimey ass beat it just sounds like it deserves a raw as fuck acapella on it, and then it would sound dirty as man! Other than that this is dope man!
Mind listening to my new track?
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Mykill Always Been One Of My Favorites Here I Must Say This One Shocked Me Tho To Me It Wasnt Like A Freestyle Or Just Another Remake If I Hadnt Have Heard Nas Version I Would Have Felt Like This Was An Original It Just Had The Feel The Flow Energy And Everything Was Just There For It Just My Opinion Tho
Delivery 4.5/5
Lyrics 4/5 (Just Cause It Says Freestyle And You Say You Just Spit Bars Im Sure If You Wrote It Would Be Higher)Comment
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