J.R. TheBeast Life On The Edge (Intro) Mixtape

[jrthebeast]

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Life On The Edge (Intro) Track Number 1, Coming off the mixtape "Life On The Edge". If you like what you hear - Download your free copy today at J.R. TheBeast - Life On The Edge Hosted by DJ HekTek // Free Mixtape @ DatPiff.com

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[mykill]

very inspirational...

flow and everything seems on point... lyrics are pretty good too... It says you're from Jersey and it comes out in your accent. You from anywhere else... I think the hook needs work. You gotta break up that repetitiveness up and in the last bar of it you did. If I were to do it, i would do it that way instead. You know like A-B-A-C, one bar then another but keep the "life on the edge, I've the voice of the streets" the thing that repeats and through in bars that rhyme with it. get me?

Overall: 3.7/5

[jrthebeast]

I respect the solid & direct opinion. My intention was to keep the hook simple, i figured it needed some work though on the repetitive part but my main thing was the message & lyrics. I was born in New York, Raised in Jersey City.

[YMgivemeachance]

Your Song is Fire breh. Very motivational. Its music like this that keep my wheels churning.

[jrthebeast]

Your Song is Fire breh. Very motivational. Its music like this that keep my wheels churning.

Appreciate that my niqqa my main music is conscious rap even though i get versatile and do a lil bit of everything. New website is up by the way yah check it out when ya get a chance: J.R. TheBeast Official Music Website | Wix.com

[KidComet]

I Like songs like these very nicely done, we should collab sometime,the hook does need work tho

[jrthebeast]

I Like songs like these very nicely done, we should collab sometime,the hook does need work tho

Always available to do a collab bruh. And yea im still working on my hook game.

[Gibbsy]

Your delivery is spot on, the beat is dope the sort of beat ide write to, your lyrically tight and the flow is spot on though out...the hook is a lil boring that's the only issue coulda been more epic but the message in it is tight though 2nd verse is my faviourite the first 4 bars are insane this is dope man!! nice work gotta download the mixtape 5/5

[Flame Beats]

beat, flow, and lyrics all on point!! 4.5/5

[jrthebeast]

Your delivery is spot on, the beat is dope the sort of beat ide write to, your lyrically tight and the flow is spot on though out...the hook is a lil boring that's the only issue coulda been more epic but the message in it is tight though 2nd verse is my faviourite the first 4 bars are insane this is dope man!! nice work gotta download the mixtape 5/5

Gradually my hook game will start coming together. But im glad you was feelin it to the point where you considered downloading the mixtape.

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beat, flow, and lyrics all on point!! 4.5/5

Appreciate it. It lets me know im headed in the right direction with my music.

[walkerwiseman]

beat, flow, and lyrics all on point!! 4.5/5

Agreed

[jrthebeast]

Agreed

Thanks bro.