Noble X D-Blaze - On My Life (Prod. By Sosa Lewis)

[THA GR8 M8]

Looking for real input on this track....

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Looking for real input on this track....

already been done by the realest on the forum.
everyone else just give you lies.

[Goobz]

already been done by the realest on the forum.
everyone else just give you lies.

seriously it was a good track foreal, but idk how to further break down to give him the input he's used to from the other artists on the forum

[THA GR8 M8]

seriously it was a good track foreal, but idk how to further break down to give him the input he's used to from the other artists on the forum

I don't really look for in depth input like that anymore anyways, I don't need that crap. I just want to know if the song sounds good to the listener and if it rides.

[LeatherParsley]

First verse sucks, hook sucks, feature sucks, cover art sucks

Slit throat of OP, trash thread

[MC_Crary]

Shit's got that bounce homie. Like the aggression in your voice too. Good track bro.

[THA GR8 M8]

Shit's got that bounce homie. Like the aggression in your voice too. Good track bro.

Thanks bruh bruh!

[mykill]

Beat? Flawless.

Mastering? Perfect.

If you mumbled through everything on here I would have thought it was an actual Chief Keef song. The "certi-fiend" line was cool, but other than that your verse was pretty ordinary. Feature was whack. I could even do better, and that's saying something cause I am horrible. It was mostly his flow and mic presence, but compared to your verse his lyrics didnt even compare. You came correct on it though, but every time I played it I kinda zoned out in parts and didnt pay attention 100%. This song could be improved if you just did a 2nd verse.

Real. Rap. Talk.

Overall: 3.6/5

[THA GR8 M8]

Thanks mykill. The line you pointed out is actually 'serve tha fiends' tho lol.

I think the song hit 100 plays already btw.

[THA GR8 M8]

Rollin grade A, yeah I be smokin
All these pills inside me, no ibuprofen.

[jrnickz]

I think u have the most catchy hooks in this forum. I'm surprised no one mentioned the multi's in this. I thought it was a good overall effort from u and turned out great. Didn't listen to second guy cause all the shitty reviews. Keep it up

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

I think u have the most catchy hooks in this forum.

actually mykill has the most catchy hooks in this forum. dont get it twisted.