Malachi Books- Untitled.

[KidComet]

https://soundcloud.com/jamesbooks/lo...other-type-ish







http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html


http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...upt-wayne.html


(sounds better with headphones)

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

the original is one of my favorite songs of all time! but aye son, lowkey thought you was bouta disgrace this shit lol but you did your thing fools. who does your mixing? shit be sounding professional lately

[KidComet]

the original is one of my favorite songs of all time! but aye son, lowkey thought you was bouta disgrace this shit lol but you did your thing fools. who does your mixing? shit be sounding professional lately

i do the same mixing that late122 uses

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

i do the same mixing that late122 uses

you used the same program, or did he mix it?

[KidComet]

you used the same program, or did he mix it?

same program

adobe audtion cs6 i think he got adobe adution 3 tho but its the same thing

[KidComet]

bump. cause i kinda put my fkn heart into this and shit like wha.

[walkerwiseman]

I fuck with it. Deep shit

[ATLien666]

This is some deep shit and you definitely did this beat justice. let me get a verse on this, real shit.

Your delivery is nice, kinda has a battle rap style feel to it, idk why. lyrically, shit was good. not technically, I guess, but fuck technical rap. I'm glad you're leaving that lil' trolling shit behind and taking music seriously.

seriously, though. let me get a verse on this shit, lmao.

[mykill]

bump. cause i kinda put my fkn heart into this and shit like wha.

you at one point troll the shit out of Tha Stu' then you get mad you get slept on? lol.... *smh* that's hilarious...

ANYWAY, lots of energy in this one. Mixing on the chrous i good, pitched voice is eh. You coulda left it off and just did like the doubling thing you were doing and it woulda sound straight. Lyrics are on point, which is to be expected from you when you seriously rap. Flow and delivery are great too... You got a good voice for rap... If you put some effort into it, I think you could get somewhere. You got a good ear for beats and you always put together good songs (when you're not f'n around). Subject matter hits home with your average joe. Like this track is a bouncy kinda track you can ride to, but its also very introspective on shit that happened to you that people can relate to. That's an A+ track right there...

Overall: 4.6/5