Overdue Diamonds - Broc

[broc717]

Its been awhile, stopping by to drop the title track off the mixtape I just put out!


check it out and let me know what y'all think!



*fixed by Mykill

Lyrics:

Verse 1:

while i open this mascado, im developin a motto
i gotta chase what i deserve, but the efforts gotta follow
and never let regret slip in with sips before i swallow
now that right theres my version of a message in a bottle
sip until its finished nothin in it and its hollow
alcohol begin undiggin these thoughts like theyre fossils
place the bones together to create somethin collassal
then present it to these mothafuckas got em yellin BRAVO
good job, you did it fam
nah hold all the compliments give me another minute man
let me project my voice thru this project ive enjoyed
creating because it leaves a haters confidence destroyed
demolish it with a wider range of modest mixed with honestness
that it is eating at their consience and i will make them all acknowledge that
my knowledge with this kinda shit is a talent god has given me
so confidence is what i breatheand dominance is what I bleed
astonishments what i recievebroc your unbelievable
how the fuck do you concieve a thought thats inconvievable
i just put my heart and will into what i thought i need to do
and i cant be touched cause what i do is think of the unthinkable


Hook:


hold up, while lookin at my crew
i told em that its time for us to make some moves
i possess the diamonds, someone provide the booth
and get in it and start givin out what is overdue
its been a long, long, time, time comin
been a long, long, time, time comin
its been a long time comin, but finally it dropped
so turn yo system up, n let that mothafucka knock like
bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang
its been a long time comin, but finally it dropped
so turn yo system up, n let that mothafucka knock

Verse 2:


if this songs bout me, then this song must be
about the definition of a young MC
about the evolution of a youngn to a king
and when he is making music hes a mothafuckin beast
you can tell em he is me,im the fella bringn heat
a million degrees speakers meltin when i speak
make em turn it up, so they feel it in their brains
every time the beat bang, till their cerebellums bleed
of course i am notorious for hoppin on a song
that unfortunately theirs and then makin it my own
i sorta wanted more than just some courses up at bloom
so i sent knock a portion of me torturin a song
he told me to send more and that ensured me he was with it
then this hobby started formin and then morphed into a business
music saw me stormin and aborted all its children
now this game is like my orphanage im sonnin all you bitches




check the mixtape too if you get a chance!

Overdue Diamonds.zip



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[DrewBooMcNasty]

Ayyyyye this shit's dope. Beat and lyric's are on point. And that remix to Rihanna's Diamonds started playing after, that shit was dope too.

[broc717]

good looks homie! glad you liked it, bump for more reviews

[mykill]

You got a new tape? You need to link that shit up... Always bump Broc-zilla around here

Off the top, I can head some mixing issues with this. There are some bars that you speed through that sound muddled. You might wanna go back over that, but since you've already released the tape it might be too late. Lots of nice lil' witty punches in there. Lyrically, I'm pleased with what you did here. All the words complement the horns and the cadence of the beat and mesh well. Wish you did something at the end... just talking or something... the beat ridin' on is nice, but it makes the track seem unfinished...


Them multies in verse 2. Good job man.

Overall: 4.1/5

[broc717]

thanks homie i appreciate the support, and ill posst it for sure!

[Gibbsy]

the beat is just dope as fuck, the whole vibe is dope man, vocals are clear and smooth the flow is solid!! delivery is insane! this the sort of track I could vibe with anytime!! not anything I can really critise except I heard a cuple of punch ins that were a lil obvious but that's hardly noticeable the libs are dope aswell!! 5/5

[broc717]

much appreciated fam!! glad you liked the track and im gonna post the mixtape now if yall wanna check it out!


but again thanks for giving a breakdown of everything, hope more people feel the same! haha


and good looks on the fix mykill ... i was trying to figure out how to do that for an hour haha

[ATLien666]

you're way too talented for your mixing to be this average.

besides for that and the beat, this was near perfect. nice multis and flow. lyrically dope, too. I definitely liked the internal rhyme thing you had going in the first verse. good shit. I didn't really like the instrumental, though. it reminds me of some shit I would hear in an old EA Sports title while the game starts. idk. the hook took a min' to grow on me, but it was pretty polished and kinda catchy. one thing about it, it fit well with the beat, idk how to explain this, but it had a early 2000 vibe to it, idk.

4.5/5